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Withinthe Circle

Within the Circle 
Around the burned down stable, near
the oak that was struck by lightning,
there is a silence within the stillness.
I can hear screams of stabled mules
running in circles trampling each other
into a bloody mass and falling beams.
Within the circle sheltered by whispering
leaves I can hear rattling of chains and
the forest afar sings of endless sorrow.
Copyright © Jan Oskar Hansen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/3/2012 5:31:00 AM
The aftermath of ghostly horror resonates, my poet friend.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 5/3/2012 9:09:00 AM
thank you kathy

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