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Sometimes thirty years feels like a long time When you’re an old soul and the hours and minutes have taken their toll But there are songs to write and words to weigh messages to impart and things to say So another song percolates Flows out onto the table You sigh deeply and for a moment feel stable If only life could be simple Cause living in your head is lonely You keep thinking to yourself “ Has anyone ever known me?” I could write you a poem Lighthearted and breezy But you’re complicated no one can promise easy Even though you’re searching for answers we can read the rings in your wood Although at times you feel ancient An old soul can be understood There are more songs to write and souls that need caressing By keeping your words honest there is release in confessing For within you resides a God who is loving He’s the source of your words the reason they are bubbling So take his hand Never be alone again He’s older and wiser and can carry your pain Happy 30th Birthday I am a fan of you

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Date: 12/27/2019 7:38:00 PM
Goodness! So many beautiful lines!! I love it!! Great work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/28/2019 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Tara.
Date: 12/18/2019 7:53:00 AM
I know I commented on this before but it was just as nice the second time around my friend!;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/18/2019 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, hugs Rick.
Date: 12/1/2019 10:21:00 AM
So many metaphorical and meaningful lines! I really enjoyed this.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2019 11:38:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 11/30/2019 10:12:00 AM
Very cleverly put. "we can read the rings in your wood" "Cause living in your head is lonely" So well expressed ... Good poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2019 10:28:00 AM
Much appreciated.
Date: 11/27/2019 1:57:00 PM
I like how you did that, I've written a few things for people. It is what we do as poets I can see you getting paid for what you do.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2019 3:11:00 PM
You are kind Robert. Thanks for taking a look around.
Date: 11/14/2019 11:26:00 AM
Wonderful tribute!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/17/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thanks Michelo.
Date: 11/13/2019 5:04:00 AM
I know how hard it is to deal with an 'old soul', they are so complex. An old soul tends to over think everything too, always searching, feelings of isolation making it even more complicated. A great write Rick, a lovely tribute....Maria Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2019 7:10:00 AM
Thanks for such a sensitive response. Hugs Rick.
Date: 11/12/2019 4:25:00 AM
Such a lovely, thoughtful tribute Richard :-) x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2019 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Elaine. ;0)
Date: 11/10/2019 7:32:00 AM
Young souls are centrifugal, old ones are centripetal. It's not a matter of physical age. In this sense, the mention of circles is very fitting.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/10/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Kurt.
Date: 11/9/2019 12:15:00 PM
Happy Birthday.i And a touching tribute, Panagota
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/10/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota.
Date: 11/9/2019 10:25:00 AM
A very thoughtful poem beautifully written, Richard. Your gracious reputation precedes you. A true friend indeed! Stellar poetry! Love and hugs always.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2019 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Freddie. This was written for a talented family member who is dealing with some personal demons.
Date: 11/8/2019 9:42:00 AM
Cause living in your head is lonely, so sad... A lovely gift to your friend. We need to love each other... all the way through... hugs. Ann
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2019 8:21:00 AM
So true. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 11/8/2019 9:34:00 AM
A wonderful birthday tribute. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2019 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Ravi.
Date: 11/5/2019 8:50:00 PM
Hello Richard … we often see in others what they possible never see in themselves and it's great that you can tribute your friend in such a fine style - thanks Richard - Lindsay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/6/2019 9:01:00 AM
Much appreciated Lindsay. ;0)
Date: 11/5/2019 3:59:00 PM
Hi Richard, a wonderful tribute poem to your friend. Would that I were thirty again. No, I am quite happy, growing older. My friend, at some hard times in our life, we always need God's love, he is ever there when we need. Excellent poetry as always Richard. A fav from me. Have a wonderful Wednesday when it comes. Blessings....Mike.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/6/2019 9:02:00 AM
Hi Mike, i hope you also have a great day my friend.
Date: 11/5/2019 11:53:00 AM
A wonderful birthday tribute. May the lucky person treasure it always. Beautifully written. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/6/2019 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Cecilia, hugs Rick.
Date: 11/4/2019 12:09:00 PM
What a lucky person! I am sure that he or she appreciates this write and its sheer sincerity and Godly presence - a wonderful Birthday present. Creatively penned Richard. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2019 1:19:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer. ;0)
Date: 11/4/2019 10:52:00 AM
Amazing Rick and nothing worth having is ever easy!;) Hug!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2019 1:19:00 PM
True! Hugs Rick.
Date: 11/4/2019 7:02:00 AM
"I could write you a poem Lighthearted and breezy But you’re complicated no one can promise easy" - this was enough. The rest was insane showing off.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2019 7:43:00 AM
Ha ha, thanks Caren.
Date: 11/3/2019 9:20:00 PM
So sweet, Richard ~ a most beautiful Happy Birthday poem <3
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2019 7:44:00 AM
Thanks HT.
Date: 11/3/2019 2:17:00 PM
what a super tribute Rick and I hope your friend has a lovely day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2019 6:42:00 AM
This write inspires, motivates, and confirms. I think you have this directed toward someone in particular, the message can be heard in the hearts of many who read this.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2019 6:55:00 AM
I love this response. Yes it is for a special talented young man who is struggling. Hugs Rick.
Date: 11/2/2019 11:01:00 PM
Richard, Happy 30th trip around the Son. -Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2019 6:57:00 AM
It’s not about me. I have been here almost twice as long ;0)
Date: 11/2/2019 10:24:00 PM
nice poem to someone turning 30...wonderful penning...living in the head may be lonely but sometimes good writes come to front... enjoyed this Rick :) hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2019 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, hugs Rick.
Date: 11/2/2019 8:54:00 PM
30 something Richard. But I do count the rings and the lines on my hand. A beautiful poem. (A personal side note to share. I was once told by someone whe "knew" that I was an old soul; but realized my hiking boots had old soles.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/4/2019 4:53:00 PM
Yuk yuk lol
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2019 7:22:00 AM
Cute response Jeff. My first full time job was selling shoes. I was in it for religious reasons. I wanted to save peoples soles.
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