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With-In the Spell

Of all the stories that us poets tell
Soul's exposed, Some of Heaven – Some of Hell


You know I'm posting this for
Brian's contest but I'm totally
lost on this one - Could some
one let me know if I'm even
in the ballpark, Thanks

mysteryon writing and wordsepigram

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Robin L. Gass

February 16, 2009 at 10:40 AM

This is awesome, Michael! I am just starting to get these! I see congratulations are in order for this well derserved win. I gues you did it right! (lol) Truth rings loud and clear in this truly inpired write. Keep them flowing, my poetic friend! Love, Robin

Nigel Fawcett

January 9, 2009 at 8:25 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved Second Place Win in Brian's contest. Love, Nigel

Joyce Johnson

January 5, 2009 at 7:47 PM

Certaily looks as though were well in the ball park. Congratulations. Joyce

Carrie Richards

January 5, 2009 at 10:54 AM

Congratulations on your second place in Brian's contest, Michael. An awesome poem!! ~ Carrie

Brian Strand

January 5, 2009 at 7:48 AM

Congrats Michael & thank you for supporting my contests & for your always welcome comments.Rgds Brian

Sharon Winter

January 5, 2009 at 7:08 AM

Congratulations Michael on your big win in Brian's contest! Outstanding and so well deserved! Love, Shar

Elaine George

January 5, 2009 at 7:00 AM

A TRUE MASTERPIECE, DEAR MICHAEL. I am at a library in North Carolinia as I write this. - returning home Jan. 15, 2009. i

Kristin Reynolds

January 5, 2009 at 4:26 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win, Michael!!! Well done! Love, and light, Kristin

Michaela Payne

December 31, 2008 at 8:56 AM

this was great Michael, so much said in so little, I think it's fine, a wonderful write by a wonderful person. ~Michaela~

December 21, 2008 at 6:21 PM

So much truth shared in just two lines. I especially like the concept of the last couple of words. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen

Brian Strand

December 19, 2008 at 12:41 AM

Michael the main key to this American Doublet form is the integral title (ie it forms a third line as it leads into the two line, ten syllable couplet) .Eg using this as an example I would make L2 'Soul’s exposed,some of heaven – some of hell' and then introduce a new title to lead in to L1.See Adelaide's example in my contest guidance.Hope this helps.Rgds Brian & thanks for your interest in my contest.