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Within the Recesses

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I held it back within the recesses of my mind the words unspoken the urge to set them free I held it in each omission with intent every painful silence as if a last resort I held you in the recesses of my heart the very thought of you I held with every breath AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on April 5, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 4/14/2022 9:37:00 AM
What a lovely poem Line. I'm so glad your didn't hold it back or hold it in but graced us with your words. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/14/2022 3:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam. Most appreciated ~
Date: 4/8/2022 4:22:00 AM
Great poesy. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/8/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj ~
Date: 4/7/2022 6:46:00 PM
Deep as in deeeeep ~ congrats on your win, Line! Poignant.
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Date: 4/8/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thank you very much ~ most appreciated
Date: 4/7/2022 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations and Happy birthday Line...This exquisite poem speaks volumes. I love each line from stanza 1 up to the last.
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Date: 4/7/2022 4:43:00 PM
Thank you for the most appreciated comment, JCB ~

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