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I am looking at the perils of retirement. 
Retirement will not be the end of the road.

The road now leads to a new beginning. 
A beginning of a rebirth of some kind.

Some kind of a new version of myself. 
For myself, I have a tendency to rush to finish tasks.

My tasks now can focus on other areas of my life. 
Life is giving me a chance not to be anxious about anything.

Anything and everything I wake up to will be a present.
A present from the Lord, because he hears my prayers.

Prayers give me peace that safeguards my heart.
My heart and mind belong to Christ Jesus.

Edward J Ebbs - 03/09/2025


Based on Philippians 4:4-7

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 3/9/2025 11:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem. The last two lines are great. Retirement is definitely different but you will sort things out and make it work because you rely on God. From experience
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Date: 3/9/2025 11:19:00 AM
uplifting think ;) ty..much love
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