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and When- threatened when I feel afraid- lost in a sea of faces MUSE will imagine an ethereal circle around me and beyond my circle a ravaged garden front back and both sides my spirit wolf protects me says MUSE on all sides he watches for those who step within my magic protective space words are weapons leaving scars on the soul my heart swells with a sea of tears and hate is a guest who comes unbidden the evil and tormentors of all kinds front back and both sides do not step within my invisible circle my sacred space beware and move back quickly, don't dilly-dally it's dangerous when the wolf protects me sometimes when he smells my fear like a dagger poised to hurt me he calls for other spirits and an assemblage appears a hissing snake that slithers a lion that roars so loud I shake a silent panther so slender and sleek a black crow that brings me a sword a hundred horses with heavy hoofs and I always keep close, so close, MUSE, my spiritual butterfly I hold her on a gossamer piece of thread like spiders silk so I can fly away . . . ___________________________ September 5, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Within My Sacred Space Copyright Protected, ID 16-825-957-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Muse On The Loose Sponsor, John Lawless First Place

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Date: 9/12/2016 4:06:00 PM
Magical piece of word-art, BW! Congrats on your top win :)
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Date: 9/12/2016 2:32:00 PM
Congrats on first place. It's so deserved. I love the imagery. Do you mind if I borrow a few of the avatars within your sacred space when I'm feeling hurt and confused? But most of all I like the spiritual butterfly... Kathy
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Date: 9/12/2016 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your TOP win with this very creative piece, Constance. Janice
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Date: 9/12/2016 1:29:00 PM
Wow Constance this is really something special! I can see why it was chosen as the top winner! Congratulations! : ) 7
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Date: 9/12/2016 12:43:00 PM
absolutely awesome Constance - the final three lines totally blew me away:-) I can see why John loved this write so much:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2016 10:11:00 AM
congrats on your well deserved first place Broken Wing! Beautifully written :)-luloo
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Date: 9/12/2016 9:18:00 AM
Such an amazing, beautifully woven poem that supports the theme, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy First Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/12/2016 9:10:00 AM
Well, BW, this one made me shout the "judges" superlative..."DAMN, I WISH I WROTE THAT!!!" ...a gossamer piece of thread like spiders silk....BBB...UUUU....TTTTT....FUL.
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Date: 9/6/2016 5:38:00 AM
A most beautiful write perfectly woven... //peace & blessings
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Constance La France
Date: 9/10/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Lewi, I love the word beautiful ~
Date: 9/5/2016 6:31:00 PM
to leave earthly bonds and yet still have feet planted firmly to its ground, to separate from the noise of the moment is a gift...my first thought after reading your poem..also a connection felt as my protective spirit is a hawk...
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Constance La France
Date: 9/10/2016 9:58:00 PM
Frederick thanks for the beautiful comment, the hawk is a powerful spiritual guide ..

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