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Within Her Eyes

Within her eyes Within her eyes… feathered whispers trace the lines of my swirling heart in cursive patterns Softly flowing stardust glimmers echo luminescent evenings of moonlit kisses Enchanting glimpses reflect desire’s euphoric ripples in the wake of our dreams As celestial quivers allure me hypnotically and once more I find my heaven… within her eyes Good night Soupers

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/14/2017 10:54:00 PM

Wow Chris this poem could've been entered in "the eyes have it contest" as well. I'm sure it would have won also! This is a beauty that goes beyond... into heaven's realm. Lovely! : )

Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:33:00 AM

Thank you so very much Connie. I actually wrote two for the contest, this was one of them but not the one I entered. I am so happy you liked this one.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/13/2017 8:32:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. This is so very beautiful and yes so very much poetry and poetic. You set the tone and stage with the title itself and the stage follows with the first line. It was a wonderful poetic expression to end the entry with the title. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful morning and day.

Chris Green
Date: 7/13/2017 8:45:00 AM

Good morning Lisa. Thanks for stopping by and delivering this smile I am wearing right now. That is great service. : ) I appreciate you my friend.