Chris Green Poet Free verse

Within Her Eyes

Within her eyes


Within her eyes… 

feathered whispers
trace the lines
of my swirling heart
in cursive patterns

Softly flowing 
stardust glimmers
echo luminescent evenings
of moonlit kisses

Enchanting glimpses
reflect desire’s euphoric
ripples in the wake 
of our dreams

As celestial quivers
allure me hypnotically
and once more 
 I find my heaven…

within her eyes



Good night Soupers

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Connie Marcum Wong July 14, 2017 at 10:54 PM Wow Chris this poem could've been entered in "the eyes have it contest" as well. I'm sure it would have won also! This is a beauty that goes beyond... into heaven's realm. Lovely! : ) Chris Green July 17, 2017 at 8:33 AM Thank you so very much Connie. I actually wrote two for the contest, this was one of them but not the one I entered. I am so happy you liked this one.

Lisa Ricci July 13, 2017 at 8:32 AM Good Morning Chris. This is so very beautiful and yes so very much poetry and poetic. You set the tone and stage with the title itself and the stage follows with the first line. It was a wonderful poetic expression to end the entry with the title. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful morning and day. Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 8:45 AM Good morning Lisa. Thanks for stopping by and delivering this smile I am wearing right now. That is great service. : ) I appreciate you my friend.

Maria Williams July 13, 2017 at 5:22 AM Romantic with a Capital R Chris. You come up with the most amazing words and lines. Love it...Maria Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 8:44 AM Thank you with a capital T Maria. :) I am happy you liked this one.

Darren White July 12, 2017 at 11:51 PM Within her eyes, go sleep there, love will find you, good night my friend :) Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 8:43 AM Thanks so very much Darren. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.

Winged Warrior July 12, 2017 at 10:58 PM Within your poetic pen...beautiful verse Chris...^WW^ Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 8:42 AM Thanks so very much my friend.

Akkina Downing July 12, 2017 at 7:03 PM Oushie,(my new word of joy) lol! this is such a darling piece my friend. Have a great night and sweet dream... hugs :) Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 8:42 AM Hey, I like that word. Mind f I borrow it? :) Thank you Kina, for this smile I am now wearing.

Ilene Bauer July 12, 2017 at 6:23 PM oh, so romantic! well done, chris... Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 8:42 AM Thank you so very much Ilene.

Dale Gregory Cozart July 12, 2017 at 6:11 PM G'night, Soupee! Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 8:42 AM Sweet dreams Daleroo. :) Thanks my friend.

Heidi Sands July 12, 2017 at 6:00 PM You have some beautiful eyes you are looking into Chris, put into writing so well. :) Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 8:41 AM Thank you so much my friend for your always thoughtful and encouraging comments. I appreciate you Heidi.