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Within Her Eyes

Within her eyes Windows holding crystal sky A Robin's nest of bluish peace A handful of blue sea of Greece Whenever storms lash and blades slash Apples tumble in agony in warnings of deluge My only refuge in those fair eyes Lovely slice of moon In the two rest rooms To quell the wet bird- like gloom Within her eyes lie My gladioli _________________________________ 22/10/2016

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Jean Murray

Date: 11/18/2016 3:27:00 AM

Hard to beat blue eyes Probir, especially when described in this delightful way. Congratulations.

Probir Gupta
Date: 11/18/2016 9:14:00 AM

Thank you ... yours one on your dad is beautiful and congratulations for your placement too ...

Constance La France

Date: 11/17/2016 7:12:00 PM

Probir congratulations on your win in the contest with this great write.

Probir Gupta
Date: 11/18/2016 12:35:00 AM

Thank you ... Congratulations to you too for your nice success of 'a red rose' ...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/16/2016 11:07:00 PM

Congratulations, Probir on a beautiful write and win:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2016 4:22:00 AM

Thanks Jo ... Your 'Within Her Arms' is beautiful too ... and congratulations on your win too ..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/16/2016 9:33:00 PM

Very cool, unique imagery! Well done, Probir and congrats!

Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2016 4:25:00 AM

Thank you, Kim ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/23/2016 2:59:00 AM

A beautiful painting of words, Probir. You are a poetic Picasso. Very lovely poem. The line ... lovely slice of moon in the two rest rooms is so magically delicious. I love reading your poems, they give tremendous joy. Ty for sharing. Love you always.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2016 9:28:00 PM

Thank you ...