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Within Her Eyes

If memories could be awaken it would be within her eyes ...years back when we were little moments we found solace in the Beach's water ...even now every bit of it is still within her eyes Times we wrote our names with our little fingers, "Carrie loves Mary" it would be washed away shortly by the waves thou but within us in our hearts it was never erased even now, as my friend stood before me, it's still written WITHIN HER EYES ~ 9th October, 2016. ~ For F J Thomas's "Brief memories "

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Constance La France

Date: 11/17/2016 7:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem ~

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/30/2016 1:46:00 AM

Lovely write. Memories are ours to keep. Friendships that are genuine are some of the sweetest joys of life.

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/30/2016 11:57:00 AM

Very true Eileen, thanks for reading.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/23/2016 4:47:00 AM

Great piece my friend Bose, the are some memories that can never be forgot, just like yours. I have a childhood friend, which every thing we did together then I do remember now. Yet he had travelled two years ago and I didn't hear of him. Thanks for posting your poems.........A.M.

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/26/2016 7:25:00 AM

Afolabi, it's always nice having you on my page...and you are right, some memories last for a lifetime...thanks for reading friend.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/16/2016 2:48:00 AM

Excellent tribute and lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/26/2016 7:23:00 AM

Glad you liked my poem Ravi...thanks for reading

Joseph May

Date: 10/15/2016 6:12:00 PM

A memory that stays in the heart...Nicely written...

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/26/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thanks Joseph

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/12/2016 1:51:00 AM

Such a lovely poem. Enjoyed it reading it very much. Good luck for the contest, Abosede.

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/26/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thanks Afzal...i'm glad you enjoyed it...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2016 3:12:00 PM

Wonderfully romantic, Abosede and thank for the sweet comments you left me on my poems.

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/26/2016 7:21:00 AM

It's always a pleasure to go to page Andrea.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 10/11/2016 7:46:00 AM

Beautiful tribute to your friend...

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/26/2016 7:20:00 AM

Thanks for reading Supraja...

Akkina Downing

Date: 10/9/2016 4:57:00 PM

Very lovely...

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/10/2016 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Akkina.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/9/2016 8:51:00 AM

very touching, Abosede. Sounds to me like you might be in love or maybe just harboring some feelings for her:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/9/2016 9:48:00 AM

Whoops, my bad. Lol I read right by it.

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 10/9/2016 9:36:00 AM

LOL! carrie is a very good friend of Mary... more like sisters. And it's just a poem! Thanks for stopping by to read my poem Daniel, much appreciated.