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Within a Dreams Memory

Sweet whispers from a land Far far away Where no pain exists Not a flaw astray And it seams to me I had not yet to know How much time could come and go Within side this place So close... But so far away. My heart beats steadily in peace As I breathe in the soft downy breeze Taking my soul within this world astray Up high in the dream's lavender sky Soul flowing through the deep blue bay. As it starts to fade away I grasp the last moments untill it breaks As i slowley open my eyes And take in the leftover scene With a smile upon my face. Oh! How beautiful life can be, Within a dreams memory...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/16/2009 5:36:00 AM
forgot the rating I think 7 is good? great work! Jim
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:35:00 AM
Catherine, really, really dreamy sweet ride with your creative style! the title is awesome too! only you could create such magic! Jim
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Date: 3/13/2009 9:58:00 PM
Enchanting and vivid. I can picture that lavender sky. Wonderful flow to this one. Dreams offer the freedom to live free, love long and do all that we have ever wanted want. Exceptional!!! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:17:00 PM
Ps. This was absolutely a beautiful poem~filled with images, colors, dreamfulness' and 'You!!!'"~"Majestical Splendor Catherine~ Within Every Possible Way~Excellent Write Dear!!!:):)
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:13:00 PM
Smile~Wow, "You," are soo beautifully amazing!!! So soft! So deep! So lovely! So enchantingly mesmerizing and alluringly beautiful I would say!!! It is like I can feel "Your Priceless Soul" within Your every words!!? And they are soo amazingly painted~ Smile~Where has someone soo gifted and beautiful been able to hide for this long!? Wow, "Beautiful Catherine~I Love Your Writing Soo Much~A Reflection of 'You!!!'"~" My Love To 'You' Always, John!!!"~"Sweet Dreams Dear!!!":):)
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Date: 3/13/2009 4:53:00 PM
I try to hold onto dreams like that for as long as I can. Such a beautiful write. Peaceful and soothing. Love the last two lines. Love, shar
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Date: 3/13/2009 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this uplifting view. I really like the opening line. Nice one. Thank you also for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 3/13/2009 3:53:00 PM
Beautiful write here, Catherine!!
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Date: 3/13/2009 12:56:00 PM
Our dreams in a lavender sky...what a beautiful description! A lovely poem! ~ Carrie
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