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Withering Ruination

 
withering
flowers dying
crumbling to pieces
melancholy, anguish, sadness, grief
decay
ruination
summer ending
trees shedding rainbow leaves
swirling, twirling, whirling, spinning
withering
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July 22, 2021


Poetry/Double Cinquain/withering ruination
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1375-126-22
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand July 24
sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place

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Kim Merryman Date: 7/26/2021 7:33:00 PM Beautifully descriptive! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/27/2021 8:10:00 AM Kim, thank you for the compliment and congrats ~love and serenity _Constance

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 7/26/2021 6:42:00 AM Wowwe this is surely a masterpiece! You have depicted the falling leaves great imagery, musing and wordings. I like usung twirling, whirling and swirling together so i liked it lots. Kudos!! ------~~~~~~^^^^^^^^ Plz also do read and comment my newest poem . Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/26/2021 8:57:00 AM Zaynab, thank you for the compliment and comment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/26/2021 1:31:00 AM Beautiful imagery. Congratulations! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/26/2021 8:58:00 AM Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Brian Strand Date: 7/25/2021 10:08:00 PM Constance ,my prize winner+ in contest 1015 Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/26/2021 8:59:00 AM Brian, thank you so much for liking my Cinquain poem, it means so much to me and thanks for the contest, and my great first place win ~ friendship and harmony _Constance

Joseph May Date: 7/25/2021 6:53:00 AM A well crafted write Constance, best wishes Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/25/2021 7:16:00 AM Joseph, thank for visiting my poem and for the comment and encouragement ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/24/2021 9:09:00 AM So descriptive. Love it, Dear Heart. (I sent you a hotmail today). Please write and tell me anything you know!! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/24/2021 9:50:00 AM Andrea, thanks for the visit and compliment, appreciate, I will go look at your hotmail ~ love and serenity _Constance

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/24/2021 12:30:00 AM Your Double Cinquain is, indeed, great. I cannot even think of such beautiful works. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/24/2021 9:50:00 AM Christuraj, thank you so much for the visit and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

L Milton Hankins Date: 7/23/2021 1:39:00 PM I like it very much, Constance. I, too, occasionally have a love affair with gerunds. This is good writing! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/24/2021 9:51:00 AM Milt, thanks so much for the compliment and laugh ~ peace and tranquility _Constance