Withering Heights

O breast, broke and bruised, hide your hollows
Tho tears will fall, the night will call...
Calling...calling from the shadows

Beam beckons, bent orb, O twisted smile
Ego chipped, firmly gripped, gripped denial...
Falling...falling far amongst the shadows

Woe, withered, worn, wind whimpers
Tragically torn, torn and twisted...
Wallowing...wallowing in the shadows 

White light, a new day born, still, I'm sworn
Hiding, hiding from the light...
Swallowed...swallowed by the shadows 



This was inspired by my first reading of Walt Whitman
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Fleming Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Nicely penned, Randy! :) john. p.s Whitman's poem you refer to certainly is a great poem.
Freie Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 3:30 PM
Thanks John, I'm particularly proud of this one. I really wanted to take my time for my 1000th poem. I appreciate all your kind words.
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