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Withering Heights

O breast, broke and bruised, hide your hollows Tho tears will fall, the night will call, Calling, calling from the shadows Beam beckons, bent orb, O twisted smile Ego chipped, firmly gripped, gripped denial, Falling, falling far amongst the shadows Woe, withered, worn, wind whispers Tragically, torn, torn and twisted, Wallowing, wallowing in the shadows White light, a new day born, still, I'm sworn Hiding, hiding from the light, Swallowed, swallowed by the shadows This was inspired by my first reading of Walt Whitman's O Captain, my Captain. It's also my one thousandth poem posted on the Soup. Thanks everybody!

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Date: 8/12/2025 3:24:00 PM
Nicely penned, Randy! :) john. p.s Whitman's poem you refer to certainly is a great poem.
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Randy Freie
Date: 8/12/2025 3:30:00 PM
Thanks John, I'm particularly proud of this one. I really wanted to take my time for my 1000th poem. I appreciate all your kind words.

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