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With You

I fly like a blue bird inside Just at the sound of your words You say you want to take care of me But what does that mean I ask And what do I have to do Would I be enough to hold you Captive in heart despite miles apart I long for love too but true I am like a rose who wears thorns I want you close despite scorn As I push away all suitors I come to you in my mind I explore all the possibilities And long for you to be near me Is this the happily ever after start You are dear to me and inspire fear At the same time as you are kind And warm chatty and happy Will you come to me if I go to you Perhaps I will stop dreaming and just Live love life…with you.

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Date: 3/5/2024 12:32:00 PM
Still haven't picked the one yet Karen haha!! He sounds like a keeper! Nice poem my friend! Debx
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/5/2024 2:01:00 PM
I think one has my interest but I am still hesitant! Lol thanks Deb!
Date: 3/5/2024 9:16:00 AM
Dear Karen, Your poem wonderfully delves deep into the complexities of longing and vulnerability. It seems to represent the struggle of balancing desire and self-preservation. Your introspective journey invites reflection on the meaning of love and the fear of opening up and I agree. You have wonderful thoughts with such raw honesty.- Blessings, Daniel
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/5/2024 1:59:00 PM
Aw thank you Daniel.
Date: 3/5/2024 5:03:00 AM
I love how you explore within the words and lines of your poem as you long for and search for long-lasting love. Enjoyed the read, Sara
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/5/2024 5:12:00 AM
Thank you Sara

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