With Thankfulness

WITH THANKFULNESS

With thankfulness, I bow my head,
As I rise up unbruised from bed.
The clock tic-tocs away my breath.
I chase away the threat of death.
The sun has dawned, the night has fled.

But time will come and snip last thread,
And at the end, my prayers* well-said,
Soft tears will fall and final breath,
With thankfulness.

Then I will see my Christ who bled
And rose again, as scriptures said.
There is no victory in death.
Christ holds me up, gives me new breath.
At heaven’s gate, reborn,  I’m led
With thankfulness.

10/9/2017
Give Me A Rondeau Contest
sponsor: Janice Canerdy
1st place

*Prayer - 1 syllable
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Haight Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Lovely Rondeau, Kim. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs, Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Your Rondeau speaks excellence...Wonderful to share the winners’ list with you...Congrats on your placement..Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Thank you Sara!
Daniel Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 5:54 AM
A beautiful rondeau of grateful hope, Kim, well done, congratulations:)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Gondolf Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 7:47 AM
A beautiful poem to read on Sunday morning to remind us that our life is in the Lord's hands. Congrats, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, John! Blessings to you :)
Inman Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 3:59 AM
Very well written and poignant piece Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Thank you James! :)
Canerdy Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:19 AM
Thank you for entering your GREAT poem in my contest, Kim. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Excited to win! Thanks Janice :)
Adaletey Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Great Kim. Some people's happiness or success depends on material things and promises from people to the extent that they have completely become insensitive to God's grace and love. Your poem to some of us, is a wake up call - to consciously acknowledge God because His grace has always seen us through.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 7:50 PM
I appreciate your lovely comment, Atsu! God bless!
George   Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Beautiful, Kim. Sincerely, Elaine
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:01 PM
Thank you, Elaine!
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 1:48 PM
A poem of prayer and devotion--thankfulness at its heart! Best for win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 2:34 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
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