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With Swords Drawn

Warriors of the realm, come the morrow's first light We engage in a battle, and we must prevail To bravely defend castle and lands. We must fight against pillaging foes. Our attack dare not fail. We march to war with banners raised, and flag flying. With our swords drawn, the raiders will be defeated. Victory ours, while the enemy lies dying. Our triumph told in legends, proudly repeated. Men, let these words I speak, fill you with fierce desire to protect loved ones and our holdings to the death. May your spirit be bold, when hope seems to be dire. We will champion what is ours, with every breath. Side by side we will stand upon the battlefield As guardians of our realm, we will never yield! * * * September 19, 2020 A Warrior Sonnet Contest Sponsored by John Lawless

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2020 6:07:00 AM

Hi Jenna, How many warriors since the beginning of time and wars have died for their land and King. We see old films of maybe the Crusaders and think oh how brutal, but then think of today, modern warfare can kill more but, all at once also brutal. Man is made to fight and win, even if his enemy is the next of kin' Love this poem so perfectly written. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/25/2020 8:32:00 AM

I'm glad you liked it, Jennifer. It was an N/A but I'd rather receive compliments from my friends

Mark Koplin

Date: 9/20/2020 9:55:00 AM

I’m digging it Jenna! Great poem!

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/20/2020 11:58:00 AM

Thank you, Mark. I'm glad you approve.

John Gondolf

Date: 9/20/2020 5:15:00 AM

Nicely written sonnet, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. John

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/20/2020 6:11:00 AM

Good morning, John, and thank you for the wish of luck.

John Watt

Date: 9/19/2020 7:46:00 PM

A gripping pep talk, Jenna... sign me up. Best wishes, my friend.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/20/2020 6:11:00 AM

Thanks very much, John. You're in and thanks for joining the fight. lol

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2020 10:00:00 AM

Brilliant sonnet. One must always defend one's country. ~~

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 10:25:00 AM

Thank you for your thoughts, Victor. I am grateful for your reading and comments.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/19/2020 8:06:00 AM

Vividly penned Jenna. GL! Linda

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 9:42:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Linda.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/19/2020 7:32:00 AM

Beautiful sonnet Jenna, you brought to mind bold knights of Camelot ready to defend their King and Castle. Good luck in the contest. Tom. PS, Im a knight for hire, dragon slaying my speciality. Hope you're having a good weekend. Tom.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 9:27:00 AM

;) Then our battle will be won!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2020 9:18:00 AM

Lol, olde Anglo saxon English (My Lady, the honour be mine.) Better set my alarm.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 9:01:00 AM

hmmm, I'm going to assume that's a 'yes.' We gather before dawn.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2020 8:38:00 AM

Min frig -] se m-aedrian sie min.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 8:00:00 AM

Sir Thomas of Cunningham, my speech was made from my castle turret, in hopes of spurring my men to fight for a good cause. I would be honored to have you join us in defending our lands. What say ye? Thanks for your well wishes, Tom. lol

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/19/2020 6:58:00 AM

A wonderful entry that should definitely win a placement. God bless you sweet lady. With many prayers for your best, Gina

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 7:12:00 AM

Your generous comments are always so encouraging, Gina. Thank you very much.