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1. Elysium
 
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Elysium
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Alternative Titles: Elysian Fields, Elysian Plain
Elysium, also called Elysian Fields or Elysian Plain, in Greek mythology, originally the paradise to which heroes on whom the gods conferred immortality were sent. It probably was retained from Minoan religion. In Homer’s writings the Elysian Plain was a land of perfect happiness at the end of the Earth, on the banks of the Oceanus. A similar description was given by Hesiod of the Isles of the Blessed. In the earlier authors, only those specially favoured by the gods entered Elysium and were made immortal. By the time of Hesiod, however, Elysium was a place for the blessed dead, and, from Pindar on, entrance was gained by a righteous life. Later writers made it a particular part of Hades, as in Virgil, Aeneid, Book VI.
 
2. Ajax
 
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Ajax the Great
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Ajax (/'e?d?æks/) or Aias (/'a?.?s/; Ancient Greek: Α?ας, romanized: Aías [aí?.a?s], gen. Α?αντος Aíantos; archaic ΑΣ?Α? [aí?.wa?s])[a] is a Greek mythological hero, the son of King Telamon and Periboea, and the half-brother of Teucer.[1] He plays an important role, and is portrayed as a towering figure and a warrior of great courage in Homer's Iliad and in the Epic Cycle, a series of epic poems about the Trojan War. He is also referred to as "Telamonian Ajax" (Α?ας ? Τελαμ?νιος, in Etruscan recorded as Aivas Tlamunus), "Greater Ajax", or "Ajax the Great", which distinguishes him from Ajax, son of Oileus (Ajax the Lesser).
Ajax is the son of Telamon, who was the son of Aeacus and grandson of Zeus, and his first wife Periboea. He is the cousin of Achilles, and is the elder half-brother of Teucer. His given name is derived from the root of α??ζω "to lament", translating to "one who laments; mourner". Hesiod, however, includes a story in "The Great Eoiae" that indicates Ajax received his name when Heracles prayed to Zeus that a son might be born to Telemon and Eriboea. Zeus sent an eagle (aietos - αετ?ς) as a sign. Heracles then bade the parents call their son Ajax after the eagle. Many illustrious Athenians, including Cimon, Miltiades, Alcibiades and the historian Thucydides, traced their descent from Ajax. On an Etruscan tomb dedicated to Racvi Satlnei in Bologna (5th century BC) there is an inscription that says aivastelmunsl, which means "[family] of Telamonian Ajax".[2]
************************* Tribute poem- With Promise Of Entry, Elysium Childhood, seeing from afar, candle burning bright with courage, imagination seeing life through always and forever the promise, heard each night- walk a brave path, receive entry, as is your due, heaven searching, whispers of two stars gazing back honor true, never shall a God's power you lack. Elysium- open gates, paradise awaits. on battlefields- glory, set by "Hands of the Fates". Ajax, blessed child and great warrior born to be father- war god, mother a nymph of the blue seas as a child roaming forests, with sword and long spear a hero born and one totally without fear, star gazing- seeing death would come, Elysian fields his destiny, gifting all of its golden yields. Elysium- open gates, paradise awaits. On battlefields- glory, set by "Hands of the Fates". Ajax, scarred and toughened, many battles fought never surrendering, ever giving his all a warrior true, there within Olympic feuds caught steady and ever mindful of his final fall, sky hunting, watching universe's resplendent glow as decreed by the Gods- set to put on a show. Elysium- open gates, paradise awaits. On battlefields- glory, set by "Hands of the Fates". Ajax, courageous warrior of Greek legend's fame gifted with prowess of strength and courage to match of Homer's Troy, that Greek hero, one and the same always fated, for a Trojan war death to catch, there on bloody soil, as Olympus had decreed death claimed he, born of true and heroic Greek seed. Elysium- open gates, paradise awaits. On battlefields- glory, set by "Hands of the Fates". R.J. Lindley, original version, May 9th, 1972 Rhyme, ( On Homer, Greek Mythology, Greek Warriors ) edited, and updated with link.. 8-18-2020 From new blog... Syllables Per Line: 12 12 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 Total # Syllables:384 Total # Words:256

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Date: 8/19/2020 1:57:00 PM
Hello Robert, you deserve a genuine golden trophy for the works you have shared with us. Not a flighty Poet, you! You have been trained well in the true art of Poetry. I, for one, am grateful for your presence Here. Thank you... Panagiota xx
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Date: 8/19/2020 6:51:00 AM
Hi Robert, amazing notes, as always, this is an exceptional write from your golden pen. Mythology, I was taken into the piece immediately. I knew that you would create a poetic gem and I was not disappointed. Your creativity and poetic skill shine through as always, Robert. Both a pleasure and an honour to read this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike. By the way, goes into my faves. Love the subject matter.
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Date: 8/19/2020 2:10:00 AM
I too, am in awe not only of your great knowledge of the subject matter, but as creator of your wonderful poetry, that brings it all to life...
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Date: 8/18/2020 8:19:00 AM
I admire your knowledge of history! You must spend hours researching. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 8/18/2020 8:13:00 AM
Your knowledge of Greek mythology shines through in this well written verse Robert. Tom
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Date: 8/18/2020 7:20:00 AM
Nicely done, my friend!
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