With One Last Glance

Fifteen years old…I trekked  the river-bend, dived
Around balmy ledges,   held by a curiosity
Nourished in toddler years,
When  Father would tenderly utter of lighting 
My  adolescence anchored on the salty
Yet fragrant curls of a bay’s fathomless wave 
Now imbued within: Viewing the shift of clay,
The marvel of paper boats leaning on rocks--

This soul became  fearless   calm   noble,
Until modernity drove an islet to the ground;
And as I take a long, last gaze at a crumbled site

A part of my innocence rushes out with it...I wail.




The Last Contest, for Silent One
12/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Your poem is just so exquisite, Nette. As always, your breathtaking imagery and emotion inspires to lifts me up and away to another place and time. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cornish Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Truly excellent art swept from your memories to ours--had to read over and over...each time a new experience.
Delaney Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations Nette: Always a pleasure to read your connection to nature and sensual womanhood. I interpret your last glance as a goodbye to childish innocence. Loved always, SuZ
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Enjoyed reading this deep moving poem, Nette, congratulations on your win.
Sands Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Nette, this poem is outstanding! Congratulations for your win with such a well written piece! A fave for me :)
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:25 AM
- Hi, Nette :) - Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Oh that last glance, that we never forget... Congratulations on your placement in he contest..
Michael Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Nothing beats youth in all it's splendor...impressions made forever...A lovely insight into you...All the best nette
Goff Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 11:40 PM
Line 13 "When blister...." astonishing leap of magical propulsion, Nette, a mere grain of sand reflects the majesty of earth's only moon...bravo!
Blown Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 6:54 PM
thank you...your verse gave my reading skills inspiration...really : )
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work. Way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender. Sara
Sergi Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Hi nette: A very eloquent poem and satisfying up to the end.
Cunningham Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 12:08 PM
A beautiful verse Nette, how lovely to look back to your youth. Good luck. Tom.
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Wonderful imagery..you build such beautiful portraits my friend..a delightful read.. a sure winner, as always, nette.
Green Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Beautiful and intoxicating in a poetic way my friend. Best wishes in the contest.
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