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With One Last Glance

Fifteen years old…I trekked the river-bend, dived Around balmy ledges, held by a curiosity Nourished in toddler years, When Father would tenderly utter of lighting My adolescence anchored on the salty Yet fragrant curls of a bay’s fathomless wave Now imbued within: Viewing the shift of clay, The marvel of paper boats leaning on rocks-- This soul became fearless calm noble, Until modernity drove an islet to the ground; And as I take a long, last gaze at a crumbled site A part of my innocence rushes out with it...I wail. The Last Contest, for Silent One 12/1/2018

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Date: 12/9/2018 8:49:00 PM
Your poem is just so exquisite, Nette. As always, your breathtaking imagery and emotion inspires to lifts me up and away to another place and time. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/6/2018 12:32:00 PM
Truly excellent art swept from your memories to ours--had to read over and over...each time a new experience.
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Date: 12/2/2018 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations Nette: Always a pleasure to read your connection to nature and sensual womanhood. I interpret your last glance as a goodbye to childish innocence. Loved always, SuZ
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this deep moving poem, Nette, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/1/2018 6:19:00 PM
Nette, this poem is outstanding! Congratulations for your win with such a well written piece! A fave for me :)
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:25:00 AM
- Hi, Nette :) - Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:19:00 AM
Oh that last glance, that we never forget... Congratulations on your placement in he contest..
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Date: 12/1/2018 5:38:00 AM
Nothing beats youth in all it's splendor...impressions made forever...A lovely insight into you...All the best nette
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Date: 11/30/2018 11:40:00 PM
Line 13 "When blister...." astonishing leap of magical propulsion, Nette, a mere grain of sand reflects the majesty of earth's only moon...bravo!
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Date: 11/30/2018 6:54:00 PM
thank you...your verse gave my reading skills inspiration...really : )
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Date: 11/30/2018 2:26:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work. Way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2018 1:33:00 PM
Hi nette: A very eloquent poem and satisfying up to the end.
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Date: 11/30/2018 12:08:00 PM
A beautiful verse Nette, how lovely to look back to your youth. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 11/30/2018 11:33:00 AM
Wonderful imagery..you build such beautiful portraits my friend..a delightful read.. a sure winner, as always, nette.
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Date: 11/30/2018 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful and intoxicating in a poetic way my friend. Best wishes in the contest.
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