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With My Eyes Closed

"My closed eyes shall forever see, the happiness you brought to me” My sadness wears a smile when my eyes are closed, keeping me from seeing what waits outside on that lonely pathway leading through the life we always talked about sharing Our song plays in my mind and I hear it calling in the darkness, the melody is soft and drifting, echoing through the room in the sweetest harmonies of you and me The taste of your euphoric kiss still lingers upon my lips as I dare not speak for fear of losing the sensation that caressed me in a feeling of ambrosia, desperate for the moment to be unending I encounter your eyes staring, floating in my grateful mind, mahogany planets hypnotically orbiting this vast space that engulfs me, remnants of a dream eclipsing an autumn moon we once called ours And as I hold the poetry you sent, I do not see the words of destined love, but caress the paper folded neatly to fit snuggly in the envelopes addressed to me, never to let go Still I cannot look because when my eyes are opened they are filled with tears for the endless days ahead without you here, but closed I can see what we had together Reminding me that if I had never had you in my life, the beauty that we shared might not have been and without you my sadness would not be able to wear this smile remembering how it felt, to be loved by you

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Date: 2/10/2017 1:16:00 PM
WoW! Chris, you poured your heart into this write. It's evident how much she meant to you. You expressed the love you all shared very well in this sad yet beautiful write. I don't think I could walk away from someone who loved me like this. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2017 12:10:00 PM
Thank you so very much Alexis for your always kind words for me. I appreciate you my sweet friend.
Date: 10/28/2016 3:33:00 PM
This touched me deep for many reasons...Any woman would love to know..the man she loved still see those envelopes...and letters once sealed to him..I hope the poet tells her and not just leave a msg in a Poet and his poetry...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 4:38:00 PM
Thank you again my sweet friend. Well, maybe someday I will, but for now poetry is the outlet for these feelings and emotions that are so deeply me.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/28/2016 3:34:00 PM
A fave.
Date: 10/27/2016 4:15:00 PM
that's so bitter sweet. like chocolate... without the sugar complete... you have a talent... to ride the waves.. of brightening days... until you crest...apon a lovers display...hey...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/27/2016 4:41:00 PM
Hey.. Thanks so much Holly. I appreciate your kind words. Yep, a little bittersweet. :)
Date: 10/26/2016 3:46:00 PM
It resonates dulcet tones of a nostalgic love, sad yet poignantly blissful.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/27/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Paloma, I'm glad you liked it. I didn't see this. Sorry for my tardy response.
Date: 10/26/2016 12:24:00 PM
Such beauty resonates in your sadness
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. Happy/sad, it seems I am on a rollercoaster of emotions and I am more of a Merry-go-round kind of guy.
Date: 10/26/2016 9:38:00 AM
Love that word ambrosia, remember the group from the seventies called ambrosia? "That's how much I feel, feel for you baby", great song!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 9:45:00 AM
I remember them fondly. Thanks for bringing m back to that time once again.
Date: 10/26/2016 9:35:00 AM
Wonderful writing Chris, she obviously left her indelible mark on your heart, the longing and hurt and joy are simultaneously felt in this masterpiece!A7 and a fave
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 9:43:00 AM
Ok, lets try this again. Thanks so much John, she sure did and this is how I try to look at it, though the sadness is heavy at times, there were many more good times than bad and feeling loved I such a wonderful experience. I appreciate your kind words my friend.
Date: 10/26/2016 9:14:00 AM
Wow, this one is amazing, Chris:) if I were the one and reading this, I would come right back crying:)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Jo, I appreciate that so very much. Though the sadness is painful, I will never allow myself to forget what it felt like when smiles were blooming. No one can ever take that away from me.
Date: 10/26/2016 7:47:00 AM
WOW!!! You are so good my friend! Enough to make a straight man gay I would say. Ha. Well done Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 8:25:00 AM
Ha, that's funny and the first time anyone has ever said that to me. :) Thanks Rick, I appreciate your encouraging comments.

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