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My mother at the age of 17.

My Darling Mother,

How lovely you were as a new bride
     Your green eyes glowed with pride
          as you stood with Dad at your side

You shared my love for writing poetry
      so as I sit in the shade of your pecan tree,
          I write this as though you were next to me
               ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Seventeen and a city girl who married a farmer
without knowing one thing about being a wife.
I remember you telling me Dad was a charmer
and together you shared a hard but happy life.

I always admired the many things you did for me.
You listened intently when I had reasons to worry.
I know there were moments when we didn't agree,
but things worked out with a happy end to our story.

Your love for Dad and the three children you beared
was the kind of love every child needs so very much. 
You made a home for us in which we always shared
your comforting affection;  gentleness of your touch.

Mom, I hope you knew how much I looked up to you
and appreciated your help when my babies were born.
You had boundless patience showing me what to do
and never once corrected me in a voice full of scorn.

I'm truly sorry if I ever made you sad or caused your tears.
As a mother I know now what I must have put you through.
I fully understand your anxiety and your unnerving fears,
so with all my heart I thank you, Mom, just for being you.

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
  April 22nd, 2016                  Francine's "Mom" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/4/2016 2:35:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful placement. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 6/4/2016 1:28:00 PM
So beautiful Lin,congratulations!
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Date: 6/4/2016 9:46:00 AM
Such a beautiful tribute to your Mom, Lin. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement in this Premiere Contest. In your absence, your lovely poems still shine! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/4/2016 7:42:00 AM
Another accolade, even in absence the honors keep coming...
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Date: 6/4/2016 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your great win! Lin, daughters never have to utter. Mothers can feel their every pulse! It's funny but they also feel the same. My mother who is nearing 90 is with me at present. She says that before she can think, her needs and desires are fulfilled! A wonderful connect between a mother and a daughter! Love, Balveen
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Date: 6/4/2016 12:14:00 AM
Congratulations on a nice win for your lovely poem. Love, joyce
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