With Grace

"with grace"

as a merry go round you circle between love around
moving crystal whites quenching romantic appetites
artistry showing rebirth of life with the sun rising
turning golden sands into a resort for seagulls found
completing a spin of vibrant colors that live within
with grace a new carousel circles beautifully in place

SkyWatcher
10-13-21

appreciationbeautynatureseasonslight verse

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Anil Deo

October 17, 2021 at 9:33 PM

I am certainly one that feels "the merry-go-around" carousel among nations I am living in chunks of years. Life happens, and shalom, shalom, shalom - God be praised at all times. His hands hold us, and heals, us, Bodies, Souls, Spirits (that incudes hands especially) amen in Jesus

Lisa Ricci

November 4, 2021 at 5:26 AM

Hello Anil - Top of the day to you. Your review and comments are most elegant with feeling. Thank you as always for such input with meaningful thoughts. May there always be the mind body soul connection. May it be intact and whole always for one and all... - Have a wonderful day filled with safety peace and so much more. Yes, shalom shalom shalom, namaste namaste namaste (smile). Blessings to you always Anil. I will see you on your page shortly. I am very sorry for this late response reaching you.

Line Gauthier

October 15, 2021 at 6:18 AM

Lovely, Lisa ~

Lisa Ricci

October 15, 2021 at 8:27 AM

Thank you very much Line - I appreciate you kind comment. Truly. Have a wonderful day. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup.

Gershon Wolf

October 13, 2021 at 12:11 PM

Looking forward to catching a ride on the next Carousel! You've painted quite an appealing canvas for the tastes of my palate. Thanks, Lisa. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Lisa Ricci

October 14, 2021 at 2:57 AM

Good Morning Gershon. Wow. What a most marvelous review with comments. Thank you ever so much. Truly. I was trying something different with this entry so your thoughts are so appreciated. Have a wonderful day with poetry and poetrysoup.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 13, 2021 at 10:37 AM

Wonderful imagery.... Take Care, Paulette

Lisa Ricci

October 14, 2021 at 2:50 AM

Good Morning Paulette - Hello and thank you very much for your gracious comment. Never do I take them for granted. Have a wonderful day with poetry and poetrysoup.

Mystic Rose Rose

October 13, 2021 at 10:06 AM

I love the idea of a carousel that turns us around with Grace dear poetess, what a lovely image you leave in my mind :)

Lisa Ricci

October 14, 2021 at 2:34 AM

Good Morning Mystic - Thank you Thank you. Your comments are so appreciated and beyond lovely. Truly. Have a beautiful morning and day. Always enjoy poetry and poetrysoup.

Chris Green

October 13, 2021 at 8:38 AM

Beautiful my friend. This poem swirls softly about my eyes and my mind. Very nicely done.

Lisa Ricci

October 14, 2021 at 2:32 AM

Good Morning Mr. Chris - I consider the eye and mind a big compliment especially coming from you who writes with the pen of silk. You made my morning. Thank you very much. Have a fabulous morning and day.

Victor Buhagiar

October 13, 2021 at 8:23 AM

Ah Lisa, anything with seagulls is a favorite of mine. Your carousel is love and entice everybody to admire your imagery. Well done. Blessings

Lisa Ricci

October 14, 2021 at 2:30 AM

Good Morning Victor - Thank you very much. I am honored by your generous comments. Truly. Please know I think the world of your work also. Have a beautiful day. Blessings always.

With Grace

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