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With Gift in Hand (Cornish Sonnet) He went in search of love’s abode; far off she lived in solitude. Along the narrow winding road, in awe partook of nature’s charms and forged ahead in eager mood instilled by thought of waiting arms. With gift in hand, a heartfelt ode, he hummed the lyrics to a tune, inhaled the fragrance, as he strode, of the wild flowers wrapped in hues. He knew his journey would end soon beside his loving ardent muse. He went in search of love’s abode with gift in hand, a heartfelt ode. ------------------------------------------ 31st December, 2015 Contest: Any Poem (Not for a Contest) Sponsor: Broken Wings Placed 4th

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/16/2016 12:32:00 AM

Oooh I like this sonnet, Paul ... and in an unique rhyme scheme, too. The image of the man giving his surprised lover a bouquet made me think of summer, and an easy-going stroll. Congrats on the high marks!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/16/2016 10:56:00 AM

Thank you for the positive feedback and congrats, Timothy. This is the first Cornish Sonnet that I have attempted, thanks to Craig's contest. He is a fair and strict judge, so anything from 1st up to HM is a welcome result:) ~ Regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2016 10:12:00 PM

Hi Paul, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2016 2:36:00 AM

Two consecutive visits from Lady Linda!! Not bad at all for an early Wed morning:) Thank You!! Hugs // paul

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 8:54:00 AM

PAUL, Congrats on your any poem win. ** SKAT **

Paul Callus
Date: 1/27/2016 2:34:00 AM

Thank you Skat:) hugs // paul

James Inman

Date: 1/17/2016 8:30:00 AM

Really lovely sonnet Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2016 2:34:00 PM

Thank you, James. It was good seeing you on the winners' list, too! Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2016 5:26:00 PM

what a delightful sonnet so glad to see it in the winners list - can't believe I missed it when you first posted it! :-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2016 2:38:00 PM

We've been having lovely weather, but yesterday it rained, and today it has gone really cold....I think that finally winter has come to stay!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2016 2:36:00 PM

Thank you...so glad you like it, Jan. This was also inspired by Craig's contest. Hugs // paul

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/16/2016 4:25:00 PM

Congratulations on this win with such a beautiful sonnet!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2016 2:49:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Pleased that you found it to your liking:) ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 1/16/2016 11:44:00 AM

Paul, an amazing sonnet..congrats on your placement *smiles*

Paul Callus
Date: 1/17/2016 2:33:00 PM

So pleased that you like it, Laura; thank you:) ~ Regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/8/2016 5:15:00 PM

Hello Paul... a delightful sonnet Paul. Full of happiness and hope - thankyou - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 1/9/2016 3:07:00 PM

Thank you, Lindsay. Glad that you enjoyed. All the best. // paul

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/8/2016 12:57:00 AM

nice....hope he found the love abode?

Paul Callus
Date: 1/8/2016 5:52:00 PM

Being a positive poem, I sure hope that he did:) Thank you for reading. ~ Regards // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/6/2016 6:59:00 AM

Paul, lovely poem from you but it is always.. =`) but with a tinge of melancholy.. =`) I've been writing less and less 'cause of lack of time.. and yes am happy i think its obvious.. =`)~OLive Eloisa hugs!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2016 1:23:00 PM

Thank you, Olive_eloi:) Could be that you are writing less, but in the meantime you are writing new chapters in the story of your life! Enjoy the moment, and let love lead the way:) Hugs // paul

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/4/2016 2:35:00 PM

So beautiful - a great write, Paul ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2016 3:08:00 PM

Thank you CayCay; I rely on your sincere judgment. ~ Regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/2/2016 3:32:00 PM

So so very beautiful. Mu first fave. of this year this poem is ... Lovely. Happy New Year to you and yours. Re your comment on my post, yes the weather is lovely isn't it ?. We just had a picnic at Mizieb today, and had the time of our lives cooking on camping gas cookers and sharing some New Year 's champagne and sweets. Lovely days indeed.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/3/2016 2:17:00 PM

Thank you, Charm, for the lovely comments and the fav. I was inspired to write this Cornish Sonnet after seeing Craig's contest rules. It's not for the contest, though, because his requires a new year theme. // Yes, it has been lovely weather for picnics and walks; I've been making the most of it! ~ Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/1/2016 2:40:00 PM

You amaze....as always. Hugs, my dear. Your muse is a lucky lady....happy New Year, dear one.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2016 4:42:00 PM

Thank you Eileen. I do try my best to keep my muse happy...where would I be without her!! Hope yours will keep you good company throughout this coming year. ~ Once again...goodnight & hugs:) *~* paul