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My first verses... I wanna be with u Coz, being with u, feel developed in me is unexpressible… I wanna play with u Coz, playing with u, joy multiplies a lot for me… I wanna stay with u Coz, staying alongside u, I can feel the heavenly presence… I wanna hug u Coz, just in your touch, there is a touch of amazement for me… I wanna live with u Coz, living with u has been dream of a lifetime since I saw u… I never wanna betray u Coz, betraying u is like betraying my own support… I never wanna miss u Coz, missing u is like missing my own smile, joy and me myself… I never wanna say u “bye” Coz, saying such a small word, I feel a large distance developing between us… I never wanna hurt u Coz, its better for me to see any disaster that to see u hurt because of me… I never wanna leave u Coz, leaving u is possibly possible only after am ‘dead’… -me(Karthik.s.s.s.)

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Date: 8/22/2024 6:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 11:28:00 AM
Sai Karthik, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2015 10:36:00 AM
SAI, a pleasure to read :) have yourself A wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year....... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:14:00 AM
good one!
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Date: 9/9/2010 1:30:00 PM
Put it to music ... it has so much potential for the charts. Welcome to poetrysoup. Come by as you will.
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:16:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sai. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:48:00 AM
great work!! welcome to poetry soup!!!hope to read more of u!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:40:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. soup offers many contests on site..check them out and enter.. good luck with luv..
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