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With a Mind Like a Steel Trap Too

Of COURSE I am not in the least insecure
My selfish-image? You bet, peerless and pure
Negative thoughts I avoid
Paranoia? Null and void
But you were talking and pointing I am sure…

For Susan’s contest

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Carol Eastman

September 29, 2013 at 10:53 AM

Congratulations on your win! Good one...

Sandra Adams

September 11, 2013 at 7:39 PM

enjoyed this one,,,,congrats on your win with this great poem :)

Lucilla Carrillo

September 10, 2013 at 8:37 PM

This is really good. Congrats for the win. hanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Moonbee Canady

September 10, 2013 at 7:22 PM

(ha ha ha he he ha) ... Timmy, Timmy, I can always count on you to put a smile on my face (that's why I always look for you when I finally get a chance to visit the site ... Your Friend, Moonie

Andrea Dietrich

September 10, 2013 at 3:52 PM

haha self contradiction. Congrats for your win with this witty poem.

Bukang Liwayway

September 10, 2013 at 8:20 AM

Congrats on your win friend tim :) cheers!! :)

Kim Van Breda

September 10, 2013 at 7:38 AM

Congrats. Tim-- well done on your deserved win here.

Joseph May

September 10, 2013 at 6:14 AM

congrats on your win ...nicely done

Skat A

September 9, 2013 at 8:28 PM

Hi Tim,, congratulations on your win ~SKAT~ :-)

Carrie Richards

September 9, 2013 at 6:49 PM

I love your wit Tim !! You would mix well with the funny-bones in my family!! Another win, but who is surprised? Not me!!

Poet Destroyer A

September 9, 2013 at 6:30 PM

wow...Tim, yup... love the win...Linda

Barbara Gorelick

September 9, 2013 at 5:31 PM

Good one Tim..perfect , paranoia, Im aquainted with..lol. BG

Kim Merryman

September 9, 2013 at 4:07 PM

Tim, congrats on your 1st place win with this clever limerick! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick

September 9, 2013 at 3:50 PM

Congrats on your great win..I knew it would be..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

September 9, 2013 at 8:55 AM

Love it! Congratulations?

Delysia Hendricks

September 8, 2013 at 7:21 AM

hahahah. I love the wit in your limerick, Tim. Well done, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Licia :-)

Sara Kendrick

September 6, 2013 at 4:33 AM

Cute one, Tim..I got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by my winning work with a side of me you had not seen..I was writing senuality about a piece of peppermint candy then I looked at the contest and remember it was suppose to be about the picture then I made a few changes to make it work..Ha!!Ha!! So that was about a peppermint stick..Sara