With a Flushed Heart


Empty throne ...
handkerchief in my hand
Missing a queen ... 
	 feeling royal pain
We’re split asunder,
guess it wasn’t in the cards
		She spoke often to the bottle;
		and her backbiting, liquor friend
said loving me was too hard
When she was leaving me,
she touched me on my wet cheek
		        and said go easy on yourself
You’ll find what you need in somebody else
And now my emotions are swirling around,
my strength is taking a plunge
I’m so vulnerable right now, I’m so undone
Living with a flushed heart ... 
don’t know if I will recover,
		this is more than just a flesh wound
Fatal are my tears flowing down,
vortex of emotions swirling around
Living with a flushed heart ... 
	I will survive, 
but only if my water of hope rises again
Empty throne,
	my right hand is missing a queen
		Wet handkerchief ... flushed heart
Tossing and turning at night
with agitated, swirling emotions — 
having another one of those bad toilet dreams
	Flushed heart,
	missing my queen
	Royal ten is my pain,
	feels like I’m getting jacked again
	Lay down on a jagged diamond ace-shaped bed of tears,
				       holding a hollow engagement ring 
Wiping my but ... but, Baby eyes after a toilet rinsing ...
        has got my sad, sad
                                        B.B. soul 
                                                      blues singing:
The King is dead, long live the king!
The king is dead, long live the King!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/3/2017 4:08:00 PM
Great line here [Lay down on a jagged diamond ace-shaped bed of tears] Light & love
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Date: 7/1/2017 11:18:00 AM
Your descriptions are always so unique, Freddie. Whenever I visit your page and read your poems, I learn so much. Love always!!!
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Date: 6/30/2017 9:54:00 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
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Date: 6/29/2017 2:17:00 PM
Just hate those "bad toilet dreams" uhh, baby, uuh, I can hear BB now...
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Date: 6/29/2017 11:07:00 AM
It is truly blues....
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Date: 6/29/2017 10:34:00 AM
This poem reminds me of that Robert Cray song, "More Than I Can Stand" Great write, Freddie. That's pretty good company!
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Date: 6/29/2017 9:55:00 AM
So full of emotion and you have written this with amazing lines and description! Jagged diamond ace-shaped bed of tears - wow! Very well written Freddie :)
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