Witchdoctors

The poor child groaned
while his mother moaned
''Ah, he's possessed, 
oh, he's been 
bewitched'', 
Superstition bemoaned.

To the witchdoctor she 
sped
and was back with 
murky potions
such yucky stinky lotions
those mythical 
concoctions

The woman obeyed the 
wily witchdoctor
Placed belief in that 
traditional healer
and the poor child still 
groaned
but his mama no longer 
moaned
After two days of 
treatment
and no lessening of 
predicament
she thought he needed
something more potent
When all it turned out to 
be
was a toothache dent! 

But she would hear of 
no dentist
Like all quacks her 
witchdoctor
had fooled her five 
senses
For his spells and his 
chants
held her too in a trance
Quite a weird weirdo is 
he
Beware the medicine-
man!
Beware that vodoo 
magic and witchcraft
That survive on the 
gullible and daft.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Archichek Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Well written, clean lines which flowed, both this and the subject matter kept me reading - although I was surprised to learn this goes on in Louisiana!
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Reading through your words gives a majestic result of creating expectations and at the same time meeting them. This is awesome considering the feat achieved in a few lines. Great write friend and please keep on letting your heart speak for us to learn and enjoy. A def 7
Bordner Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 4:01 PM
James Frazer would appreciate your poetic analysis Zanyub. Magic is a very real thing, supernatural use of natural forces unusually applied. I like superstition and Magic, and I believe in biofeedback. Allopathic "medicine" is just as dangerous as ritual magic. I admire the intellect of this write. J.A.B.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:47 AM
Thanx a lot justin, u r soo right, my man has made me distrust the toxin of pharmaceuticals and aleopathy too, u r right, just as harmful as magic superstition. And i do believe n use instead in herbal, natural and at times homopathic meds n treatment
Nasir Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:35 PM
REALLY REALLY loved it ... so went in a flow ..but should have told the end ..what happened to kid then ?
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:19 PM
I enjoyed this fascinating well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!
Gribble Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Interesting poem that tells a story with a moral. Good work. Best wishes, Shirley
Enriquez Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Dear S.zaynub: Nice write. Nice read. Well done. Leon
Smith Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Love it! It reminds me that we tend to think the worst first.... Nicely done... Arlene
Dahlusion Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:26 PM
This is so beautifully visual and nicely presented. You writing is top-notch. Bravo, Poet! —))
Callus Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 1:33 PM
You have a way with words; enjoyed this narrative where rhyme plays a prominent part. [hope the medicine man is not in business with the BigPharma!!] // paul
Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this gem! Witchdoctors are skillful in playing on our need for "magical" or supernatural healing. Great write! Kindest regards.
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