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The poor child groaned while his mother moaned ''Ah, he's possessed, oh, he's been bewitched'', Superstition bemoaned. To the witchdoctor she sped and was back with murky potions such yucky stinky lotions those mythical concoctions The woman obeyed the wily witchdoctor Placed belief in that traditional healer and the poor child still groaned but his mama no longer moaned After two days of treatment and no lessening of predicament she thought he needed something more potent When all it turned out to be was a toothache dent! But she would hear of no dentist Like all quacks her witchdoctor had fooled her five senses For his spells and his chants held her too in a trance Quite a weird weirdo is he Beware the medicine- man! Beware that vodoo magic and witchcraft That survive on the gullible and daft.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/13/2015 8:39:00 AM
Well written, clean lines which flowed, both this and the subject matter kept me reading - although I was surprised to learn this goes on in Louisiana!
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Date: 4/28/2015 9:19:00 AM
Reading through your words gives a majestic result of creating expectations and at the same time meeting them. This is awesome considering the feat achieved in a few lines. Great write friend and please keep on letting your heart speak for us to learn and enjoy. A def 7
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Date: 8/16/2014 4:01:00 PM
James Frazer would appreciate your poetic analysis Zanyub. Magic is a very real thing, supernatural use of natural forces unusually applied. I like superstition and Magic, and I believe in biofeedback. Allopathic "medicine" is just as dangerous as ritual magic. I admire the intellect of this write. J.A.B.
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:47:00 AM
Thanx a lot justin, u r soo right, my man has made me distrust the toxin of pharmaceuticals and aleopathy too, u r right, just as harmful as magic superstition. And i do believe n use instead in herbal, natural and at times homopathic meds n treatment
Date: 7/20/2014 1:35:00 PM
REALLY REALLY loved it ... so went in a flow ..but should have told the end ..what happened to kid then ?
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Date: 6/25/2014 4:19:00 PM
I enjoyed this fascinating well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!
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Date: 6/11/2014 10:48:00 AM
Interesting poem that tells a story with a moral. Good work. Best wishes, Shirley
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Date: 6/10/2014 10:41:00 PM
Dear S.zaynub: Nice write. Nice read. Well done. Leon
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Date: 6/10/2014 4:12:00 PM
Love it! It reminds me that we tend to think the worst first.... Nicely done... Arlene
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:26:00 PM
This is so beautifully visual and nicely presented. You writing is top-notch. Bravo, Poet! —))
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Date: 6/10/2014 1:33:00 PM
You have a way with words; enjoyed this narrative where rhyme plays a prominent part. [hope the medicine man is not in business with the BigPharma!!] // paul
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Date: 6/10/2014 10:04:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this gem! Witchdoctors are skillful in playing on our need for "magical" or supernatural healing. Great write! Kindest regards.
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