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Pleiades 6 Contest~Sponsor: by Joseph May ~ September 23, 2023

Wicked hexing creatures Wagging their evil tongues while casting ancient spells Wart faced old hags. Women who recite sorcery, with newt eyes in cauldrons Wretches grouped in covens

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Terry Flood

Date: 9/29/2023 5:09:00 PM

Congrats on your well brewed win, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:15:00 PM

Thanks,Terry. Just don’t drink that toxic brew!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2023 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win, Lin! This is eerie with an overwhelming sense of brooding evil! Well done. Congrats and high fives!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:14:00 PM

Your adjectives describe exactly the mood I was hoping readers would discern. Thanks, Sam.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/27/2023 3:13:00 PM

Lin, this is excellent! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:13:00 PM

Thanks so much, Janice.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/27/2023 8:31:00 AM

Hi Lin, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:13:00 PM

I’m glad to see you again and thank you, Alexis.

Terry Miller

Date: 9/27/2023 7:21:00 AM

Excellent and spellbinding Pleiades; congratulations

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:12:00 PM

I appreciate your thoughts and congrats, Terry.

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 6:02:00 AM

Very nicely done Lin, Congrats on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:11:00 PM

Thanks for the honor, Joseph.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/25/2023 2:05:00 PM

Whoa. I hope I'm not one of them. Very scary..You've captured them so well in this pleiades. Best of luck on the contest.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/29/2023 5:11:00 PM

You are definitely not a witch, Nancy. Thanks for commenting.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/24/2023 4:45:00 AM

Good poem Lin, but get to know a Strega sometime ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/24/2023 4:56:00 AM

Thanks, Jeff. hmmm... other than it being a bewitching liqueur, I don't know if it's a type of witchy thingy

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 11:07:00 PM

Great form and word choice, Good luck!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/24/2023 4:54:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Karen!

Di11y Da11y

Date: 9/23/2023 11:04:00 PM

I thought this was an autumn poem for a bit - sweet October vibes :)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/24/2023 4:53:00 AM

lol Dilly. There's nothing sugary about any of these lines.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/23/2023 5:24:00 PM

Hi Lin, This is a good descriptive piece on a witch. I could just picture the old hag, warts and all! I almost wrote about witches too. But my stubborn” muse” wouldn't budge. I think she likes Vampires lol! Best wishes in the contest-Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 9/23/2023 6:46:00 PM

Ehhh Witches or vampires… they’re all ghoulish. Thanks, Alexis.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2023 4:51:00 PM

Excellent descriptive poem on witches, gee you dont mince your words lin lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/23/2023 6:45:00 PM

Ha. I thought I was being amicable compared to what I wanted to write, knowing a couple.