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Wicked aged woman, wreaking harm with cauldron, warty nose, crafty eyes; Wisdom sees through dark guise! When riding purple broom, wild crone cackles at moon. Warblers on crimson skies.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/2/2023 7:04:00 AM

Love this and how you top it off with “ Warblers on crimson skies.”

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/2/2023 11:41:00 AM

Your lovely thoughts are so much appreciated, Kim. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/29/2023 7:50:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your write. Have a great evening and weekend:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/29/2023 10:01:00 PM

Hi Alexis, thank you so much. I hope your weekend is blessed. :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2023 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Evelyn! Colorful images and vivid descriptions like "wild crone cackles at the moon," make this poem come alive with a sense of witchery and foreboding! So well done! Blessings of autumn joy to you, my friend!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/28/2023 11:38:00 AM

Thank you so much for the great pleasure of your comment, Sam. :)

Terry Miller

Date: 9/27/2023 7:29:00 AM

Excellent Pleiades, and with rhyme! congratulations

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/27/2023 10:55:00 AM

Thank you very much, Terry.

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 6:13:00 AM

Congrats on your win Evelyn, Very nicely penned

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/27/2023 10:54:00 AM

I am so honored, Joe. Thank you for your warm words of congratulations. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/26/2023 4:25:00 PM

beautifully written, withches can seduce thanks eveyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/26/2023 9:09:00 PM

Thank you, Yann. Your words uplift and delight. :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/26/2023 2:06:00 PM

Dear Evelyn this is a great Pleiades poem. Great imagery illustrates the witch very well and the picture enhances it. I particularly love the lines,’ wild crone cackles at moon’ ‘ warblers on crimson skies’- very poetic. A very enjoyable read. Good luck with the contest my poetic friend. Hugs and smiles x:):)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/26/2023 9:06:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend, for the great pleasure of your appreciative observations and good wishes. Blessings and hugs. x :):)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2023 9:54:00 AM

- A timeless witch, Evelyn ... great written - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/25/2023 4:01:00 PM

Your words are so much appreciated, Anne-Lise. Thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/24/2023 6:07:00 AM

Dear Evelyn, your description of the witch was absolutely captivating. The way you painted her with your words allowed me to see her vividly in my mind's eye. From the crookedness of her nose to the darkness in her eyes, every detail was finely crafted.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/24/2023 12:13:00 PM

Thank you for your joy inspiring remarks, my friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2023 5:15:00 AM

You described her perfectly my friend--Wicked aged woman, wreaking harm with cauldron...

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/24/2023 12:10:00 PM

Your kind words bring smiles. :):):)

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/24/2023 4:56:00 AM

Delightful! One good think about being old and haggard, I have no need for a costume, just showing myself at the door for the kids is startling enough:) Delightful, fun read. Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/24/2023 12:09:00 PM

Lol, a wild exaggeration, I'm sure! Thank you for your fine compliments. :)

Silent One

Date: 9/24/2023 2:40:00 AM

Hey Evelyn you described a witch very well.. I think the image of the witch has changed these days, as there are a lot of so called 'white' witches around these days.. i've met a few, who speak about their peace... isnt it sad that women were burned alive for being accused of being a witch.. and i think there is the wiccan witch.. but i may be wrong there.. anyway i transgress.. good luck in the contest.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/24/2023 12:03:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and interesting insights, Silent One. I hope your day is wonderful.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/24/2023 1:47:00 AM

Halloween and a great Pleiades. Well done, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/24/2023 11:59:00 AM

Thank you for your very gratifying comments.

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 10:26:00 PM

Fabulous form fun read!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/24/2023 11:58:00 AM

Thank you very much, Karen.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/23/2023 9:25:00 PM

You nailed it, loved that third line!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/23/2023 9:29:00 PM

Many thanks, Arthur. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/23/2023 9:20:00 PM

Brilliantly pleiades on witches, i have been thinking of doing a witch one too and here you are as always presenting a creative one with excellent rhymes and wordplay. I love “ warty nose crafty eyes” how creative is that. Definitely a top winner. Goodluck for the contest

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/23/2023 9:28:00 PM

Thank you for the delight of your comment, Ink. I wish you every success in creating your poem. I'm sure it'll be wonderful, as you're so talented. Blessings.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2023 5:24:00 PM

what a wonderful descriptive poem Evelyn, i love the end rhyme too:-) hugs Jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/23/2023 9:22:00 PM

Thank you for your very kind words, Jan. Blessings and hugs. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/23/2023 3:56:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, I almost chose” Witch” too. But my muse wouldn't budge so I chose Vampire instead. You captured a “ witch” very well in your well-written” Pleiade”.I could just picture her in my head due to your talented pen. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/23/2023 9:20:00 PM

Hi Alexis, I'm happy that you were able to visualize my witch. I'm glad you found a topic that works for you. Thank you for your kind words. Good luck in the contest. Evelyn

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/23/2023 3:44:00 PM

Hello Evelyn, A good poem for Halloween. The witches are wicked. Hugs. /darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2023 4:26:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, Your welcome my friend. /Darlene\ Enjoy your day my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/23/2023 9:15:00 PM

Hello Darlene, Thanks you so much for the compliment. Hugs and blessings, Evelyn