Heidi Sands Poet Terzanelle

Wishes To Be

Sitting at the edge of the lake,
I watch reflections in front of me
Swirling with the wishes I make

So many, but the most to be free
As if I’m flying up in the sky
I watch reflections in front of me

I want peace instead of wonders why
I want love to spread with every breeze
As if I’m flying up in the sky

Dropping angel’s feathers on the trees
I want wishes to grow, standing tall
I want love to spread with every breeze

So truth will shine, relieving us all
As reflections become part of me
I want wishes to grow, standing tall

Conclusions to wishes I can see
Sitting at the edge of a lake
As reflections become part of me
Swirling with the wishes I make

1/9/20      

Entry for What are your wishes contest.  Sponsor:  Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 14, 2020 at 5:04 PM Hello Heidi, i hope that all your wishes do come true. Have a nice evening my friend. Heidi Sands January 14, 2020 at 5:08 PM Thank you very much Darlene. That is kind of you to say. I hope you have a nice evening too :)

Quoth Theraven January 9, 2020 at 10:53 PM Heidi, The traces of the best wishes hoped for, and you let them fly well. -Richard Heidi Sands January 10, 2020 at 1:12 PM Thank you Richard :)

Panagiota Romios January 9, 2020 at 3:24 PM Beautifully penned, Heidi. Best wishes in the contest! Panagiota xx Heidi Sands January 9, 2020 at 4:50 PM Thank you for your kind comment and support Panagiota! :)

Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 3:02 PM Excellent poem, Heidi--I really liked the musical tone dwelling in nature-- in this beautiful form. A sure win for you. Heidi Sands January 9, 2020 at 3:03 PM Thank you so much Vijay! I am grateful for your happy encouragement! It makes my day :)

Chris Green January 9, 2020 at 2:43 PM Those are some very beautiful and heart touching poetic wishes my friend. I just loved this. Best wishes in the contest Heidi Sands January 9, 2020 at 2:50 PM Thank you so much Chris. I am very grateful for your support and I am happy you loved this. :)

David Mchattie January 9, 2020 at 2:25 PM Fortune favors the 'bold.' So get out there and make those wishes come true. Wonderful poem. Stay frosty my friend. Heidi Sands January 9, 2020 at 2:41 PM Thank you David. I appreciate your encouraging comment :)