Wishes For Tomorrow

A needled wail reeks from his dusky face while gnawing thoughts keep the moon awake, praying for grace to ebb the lonely tides that he blesses another empty night for godly luck-- Out there thin arms recoil …in urgent need a street child who droops low with hunger …grief. He dream-walks once more, all the more to become a youngster along playground of fields at the soonest time in a place called home, where life is more than crumbs, where laughter glows through lithesome family scene… and not a plague: But wishes tear fast like newspaper rags when midnights play a broken lullaby-- Till daybreak croons new streak of faith as gauzy eyes yearn life’s reprieve, believing wilfully in divine bread … his morsel, his finest tomorrow called home. Tomorrow Contest of Edward Ibeh 11/21/2018
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Proxenos Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 9:52 AM
A thought provoking poem which I see from below earned you a win and many congratulations. A wonderful write Nette, May every tomorrow make your dreams come true. Blessed festive hugs, Jennifer.
Ibeh Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Fabulously penned, Nette!:-) Loved it! Congratulations on placing in my contest!
Man Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 3:08 AM
Nette, I felt every word of this beautiful, brilliant write.. including its contrast to my own blessed life, yet I too am among that number that dreams of better tomorrows!
Sergi Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Hi nette: A beautiful wish for our tomorrows! I wish you well in the contest!
Vaso Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 12:52 AM
I enjoyed this, I hope for all of us our tomorrows are Home!
La France Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Nette, so beautifully penned , I just love everything about your write and wish you the best of luck in the contest, well done ~
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Reads like a good contender. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Daniel Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Very sad and touching, Nette:)
Kiser Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Sad, too many children, "dream-walk" nowadays. No child should ever have to. The rich get richer; the poor...starve. Our society can and should do better. Well penned.
Rose  Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 4:29 AM
This brings a tear to my eyes. How sad that so many children go to bed hungry and unfed. I wish I could take them all home to my place and feed them all. Nice poem Netter, It made me feel, Winning wishes,
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 3:46 AM
- Beautiful dreams and wishes for tomorrow, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Amazing! You are such a good writer Nette. This should do very well :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 4:33 PM
I don't see how anyone judging a contest could pass this moving poem up Nette. It tugs at the heart! Beautifully composed my friend! : )xxoo
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Your melancholy start is quite apt given the life you paint of a street child suffering in grief and hunger. Thank goodness for dreams.. for so many like him have nothing more. On to tomorrow! Well written, nette. Best for a TOP win.
Bateman Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Hello Dear Nette, This new Lyric of yours is quite powerful and passionate as evidenced from the compelling nature of the sad situation you thoroughly describe. Your last stanza says it all in the end for the street child and his divine bread . . . his morsel . . . his finest tomorrow called home. This happens, unfortunately, all over today's "modern world." Outstanding Work!! A FAVE for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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