Wish Upon a Star

The sky is pitched black
    A full moon shining bright
    All the stars are out
    Like diamonds shining

    Staring at the sky
     I pick the big star
     Wishing upon it
     For a special wish
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Ramos  Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 9:54 AM
Beautiful write, may all your wishes come true
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 12:20 PM
hello Gregory Ramos, oh thank you so much. Have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 2:55 PM
What a pleasant poem to greet my morning. Thank you. David in NZ
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Hello David Smith,you are so welcome.Darlene in Canada. Have a nice day my friend.
Sergi Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Beautiful poem, Darlene: I wish the wish comes true
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Hello Ralph Sergi, I hope that it comes true. same wish On the same star. Have a nice evening my friend.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 5:52 AM
I hope all your dreams come true. x
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Hello Leanne Lovejoy-Burton, Thank you Leanne. So do I. Have a nice day my friend.
Poetry Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 4:23 AM
Oh dear, quel bijou de poesie ! So i wrote this : As for me, I choose the little one       that i do call a little star !       and with love and friendship        I say she's mine ...!         So I make my request,          sure to come true ...! Salute and good day friend ! alkas.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 8:06 AM
Hello Alkas Poetry,oh! Why not the little star, it would work out to. I Then I wish upon it.say the big star is mine.Then I wish upon it ....hoping it will come true. Salute.Have a nice day my friend.Darlene
Hauser  Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Beautiful piece!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Hello Mike Hauser,I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope you had a Happy Easter. Havve a nice day my friend.
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:12 PM
- I cross my fingers for your wish to be fulfilled, Darlene :) - Lovely poem :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:21 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, thank you my friend. I am hoping my wish comes true as well. Happy Easter. Hugs Darlene:
Onclaud Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 9:11 AM
it's magic, darlene.. huggs
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:02 PM
Hello Nette,yes it is magic. Hugs: Have a nice day my friend.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Hope the wish came through
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Hello Allen Beilschmidt Sr. I am hoping as well. have a nice day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 4:04 PM
I hope your wish comes through Darlene. Happy Easter. Tom.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:13 PM
Hello Tom, I also hope my wish comes true. happy Easter to you and family. have a nice day my friend.
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