Wish I Could Smile

Wish I could find more energy wish my will was stronger I am so weary now of things dark clouds hover over longer wish I could reach out to the stars hold them in my humble hands dance along side moonbeams in sand-scaped desert lands wish I wasn't weak wish I made no mistakes could I breath easier if there was give to these takes wish I could smile but there is sadness in the air. I wish I could be a light but there is no light out there I wish that time went slower I wish that I could soar then I could look down upon you if life wasn't such a chore I wish for all the gold and riches I could shower you in gifts I'd make your sadness happy your spirits I would lift wish we were in heaven with other angels we'd play there'd be so much rejoicing each and every day I wish all our prayers would come true then once more I'd be alone with you
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Date: 7/15/2015 11:37:00 AM
Sigh! Another beautiful... tho melancoly (sp?) write. You never fail to amaze me... You are such a romantic! Grandpa Troll wants to know if he can borrow some of your twist of phrases... to try on some of those girlie Trolls...
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2015 1:34:00 PM
Tell him he can use all that he likes : )
Date: 7/14/2015 2:20:00 PM
- A touching and a little sad poem, Tim - Come up with your smile again :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/14/2015 4:44:00 PM
Thanks A-L...My smile has emerged today : )
Date: 7/14/2015 2:07:00 PM
A beautiful write captured with vivid imagery. so sad and excellent. Love it.......A.M.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/14/2015 4:43:00 PM
Thank you AM
Date: 7/13/2015 8:37:00 PM
So very sad...But wonderfully penned. Im sure if there is ever a light in the darkness it would be from your kindred soul..Search deeper.Very deep poem..
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/14/2015 4:43:00 PM
Thank you sweet one
Date: 7/13/2015 5:30:00 PM
Wow Tim dont tell me you are coming over to the dark side!!!! :) beautiful poem!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/14/2015 4:42:00 PM
I think I just tripped over one of your many layers of shadows : )
Date: 7/13/2015 4:37:00 PM
This is sad and beautiful at the same time. I can feel the current within this piece.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/14/2015 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Richard
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