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Robert J. Lindley, 6-04-2018
Rhyme, ( Dark Is The Horse, In Fate's And Sorrow's Stream)

Syllables Per Line:
8 8 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 8 8 8 8
Total # Syllables: 240
Total # Words: 198

Wish I, That Time Within Its Flow Wish I, that Time within its flow, had sent forth my birth long ago. In its union with Man and Fate, had not sprouted this soul too late. For now heart cries in spurts and moans, sorrows found deep in aching bones! In my woeful and darkened days, over and deep, misery plays. Red sun sets but I see no shine, dark rests seas filled with bitter brine. Shallow are the night's streaming dreams, far too pale wandering moonbeams! When I cry thus, "Woe this sad life" Fate smiles and stabs deeper its knife. A triple twist and mind explodes pity I chose these darkened roads. As pain then joins with sorrow's grief, despair's pits come beyond belief! Ancient history would have found, this soul at rest and never bound. For my curse, life is now too fast chained to ship sailing at full mast. Seas stormy and waves crashing high, thus Heaven hears not my sad cries! Wish I, that Time within its flow, had sent forth my birth long ago. In its union with Man and Fate, had not sprouted this soul too late. For now heart cries in spurts and moans, sorrows found deep in aching bones! Robert J. Lindley, 6-04-2018 Rhyme, ( Dark Is The Horse, In Fate's And Sorrow's Stream)

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Date: 6/20/2018 9:09:00 AM
This poem is very thought provoking. An amazing talent to have a poem make the reader feel the depth of emotion.
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:49:00 AM
Exceptional write Robert in all aspects, story, rhyme and meter. You are an old soul wishing to be born in another era, very poignant - but you are an 'old' soul experiencing the new world as you would have wished in your past life. Great story - loved it ...Maria hugs
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:53:00 PM
wow, what great work, Robert!! Susan got it right. It's so poignant. I just LOVE this image you created: For my curse, life is now too fast chained to ship sailing at full mast.
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Date: 6/8/2018 9:55:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I put so much of my heart and soul into this one. Very pleased you found it so and gave such kind comments..
Date: 6/4/2018 9:05:00 PM
My dear friend Robert, your dark and poignant poem cries in tears of woeful, powerful imagery and beautiful rhymes. Pain, sorrow and despair would haunt an 'old soul' longing to have been born in an earlier time; 'Ancient history would have found, this soul at rest and never bound.' This gem reflects deeply perceptive introspection and haunting longing for a simpler time. A gleaming and magnificent write my friend! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/4/2018 9:40:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, your comments are on the mark in that I feel I have an --"old soul"-- one that is out of step with modern times. Always a pleasure to get the benefit of your insight and judgment of my verses. Especially so on this piece, since I wrote it in a mad rush early this morn and did no editing. Just kinda flowed on out.
Date: 6/4/2018 4:31:00 PM
Robert this is an exceptional piece of writing, excellent flow, rhyme and so interesting, dark and emotional poem, thoroughly enjoyed reading my friend. :))
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Date: 6/4/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thank you my friend. So many poets refuse to write dark poetry or even poetry about sorrows, yet life is not a bed of roses. Sure it is matter of choice, so I chose to write the good and the bad about life. Its love, joy, beauty, wonders and its pains, darkness and sorrows.
Date: 6/4/2018 3:52:00 PM
This is really a profound lamentation. In your second line you might mean "'had' given birth". Strong write. It's tough getting old, but there's still bright stuff, too!
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Date: 6/4/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I have just now rewritten that verse to keep the eight syllable count. A sorrowful lamentation it is my friend. Life gives both the good and the bad and sometimes the bad is so truly bad-especially in youth and its mistakes. Yet for me this is more about my heartfelt belief that I was born out of my time. And modern culture fits me not too well..
Date: 6/4/2018 1:47:00 PM
Too late no...a little before time maybe...I like the vibe of this one...it's mystic... All the best Robert
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Date: 6/4/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Of course it is not too late to step into the Light. As long as one breathes they have free will and can thus choose.

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