Wish

Quote By Poet: "Make a wish. Will it come true. Only time will tell." Today is my birthday, they said make a wish and blow out your candles. I did, but my wish never came true. On a star filled night they said, take a star and make a wish. I did, how long do I need to wait for it to come true. My trust I put in you, I did what I was told to do. Is making a wish, a waste of time. All I can say, is boohoo.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/21/2023 11:29:00 AM

wish Date Written: 4/23/2023 "1 Place"

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/11/2023 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula. No guarantees in life, but there is always hope expressed in a wish! Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/11/2023 11:21:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you. So true, there are no guarantees in life. There is always hope/prayer. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/27/2023 2:36:00 PM

Congratulations Paula! May all your wishes know the light of fulfillment. Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2023 10:15:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Yes, may the wishes come true. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Constance La France

Date: 4/27/2023 12:14:00 PM

Paula, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, love your quote, congratulations !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2023 2:33:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "wish" write & love my quote. Thanks for the placement & for having this "W" contest. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Joseph May

Date: 4/27/2023 7:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win Paula, Very nicely penned

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2023 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "wish" write. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2023 6:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2023 11:28:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like this "wish" write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2023 4:01:00 AM

Back again to comment on this somewhat sad work found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you enjoyed my "wish" write. Yes, a little sad but true. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Valsa George

Date: 4/26/2023 8:45:00 PM

Back to your poem with congratulations Paula, on your first place win. Have a great day! Blessings...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2023 11:25:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/26/2023 7:18:00 PM

Yes , It is a fine poem Wrote by a pro. Win the Contest. Congratulations on your win in the Contest dear.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2023 11:24:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "wish" write. Your kind words put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2023 5:34:00 PM

This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2023 11:21:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/26/2023 4:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Paula. A lovely poem

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2023 11:20:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you like this "wish" write. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/24/2023 8:44:00 PM

Keep the faith dear lady. One day all your wishes may come true. Be well. Sincerely, Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/25/2023 9:11:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like this write. Yes, one needs to keep the faith. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/24/2023 1:41:00 AM

A sweet write Paula may all your future wishes come true . Well done Good Luck

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2023 9:35:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write. May both of our wishes come true. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Valsa George

Date: 4/23/2023 11:50:00 PM

Love your poem and your wish coming from a simple heart. May your wishes come true. All the Best dear Paula in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2023 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you love my wish write. May both of our wishes come true. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2023 10:51:00 PM

Nice one, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2023 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/23/2023 6:52:00 PM

Well, 'when you wish upon a star,' as Pinocchio was told -- they didn't realize just how far away those stars are!! Takes a few light-years for them to get the message, you know. lol. Don't hold your breath, gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2023 9:27:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my "Wish" write. Guess with it being light-years for them to get the message, I can stop holding my breath. Hahahah!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/23/2023 2:34:00 PM

To make a wish one has to be alive, therefore, the most important wish is already fulfilled. All other wishes are important but not as important as being alive. Happy Birthday! Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2023 9:23:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for the happy birthday. Good to see you. Glad you like my write. Yes, being alive is most important. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/23/2023 1:53:00 PM

sometimes it takes longer then we know, sometimes, it waits for us to be ready, God might have a surprise in store for you lol, love this

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2023 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my wish write. True, God might have a surprise in store. Time can also play a part in it. Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/23/2023 12:16:00 PM

Hello Paula, I makes wishes on a star to. It is always the same wish. I am still waiting for it to come true. will keep on wishing for this wish until it does come true. Hugs/Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/25/2023 10:30:00 AM

Hello Paula, Yes we both can still wish for these wishes to come true. Thank you. Enjoy your blessed day my friend. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/23/2023 1:15:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you like my wish write. Sometimes things do take time and sometime they just don't come true. We can both keep wishing. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2023 11:17:00 AM

- Things take time ... maybe the wish will come true ... a lovely poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/23/2023 1:12:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you like my wish write. True, things do take time. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2023 10:38:00 AM

Sometimes what we want takes time to come about and sometimes we need to start with small goals, work towards them until that wish comes true by accomplishing those goals. Thanks for sharing this one and making us think. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/23/2023 1:11:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad this fun wish write will make the reader think. Yes, small goals to start. Step by step... Have a blessed day writing away.........................

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/23/2023 10:34:00 AM

Hi Paula, Not your traditional" make a wish" poem. But I enjoyed all the same. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/23/2023 1:08:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my non-traditional wish write. Have a blessed day writing away.........................