Wish

By branches of the Tanabata, to the waters of the Trevi, on the wall of the Virgin, or in stars of the sky, I will wish for thee, in purest form, that I find, you here, Love.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/14/2024 6:45:00 PM

Dear Shane, your Nonet's imagery and emotion cascades gracefully down upon the poetic page with expressive beauty. A splendid wish. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Shane Thacker
Date: 2/14/2024 7:25:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. To find love is my greatest wish in the well of manifestation. Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a comment.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/8/2024 4:26:00 PM

A love, Nonet. Well written Shane. You write in many forms I see. I like to go back and see the first post of poets I read. This was a great first post. See you soon, Bill

Shane Thacker
Date: 2/8/2024 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, Bill. I really appreciate it. One of the reasons I love Soup, is because of the contest. Regardless if I ever win, the contest spark an idea or present a challenge when I'm feeling uninspired. It's been a great tool for me to write. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/27/2024 12:08:00 PM

An expressive Nonet, Shane. On meeting a new poet I always tend to go read his first one on Soup! Regards // paul

Shane Thacker
Date: 1/27/2024 1:44:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. I think that's a wonderful concept.

James Horn

Date: 11/23/2023 6:44:00 AM

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James Horn

Date: 11/23/2023 6:42:00 AM

Andrea is great long ago up until now always knows how. Goe me would endow so I could get by some how write poems here and now

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/7/2023 1:01:00 AM

beautiful nonet on love theme

Shane Thacker
Date: 5/8/2023 8:58:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, on my poem, Mahtab. I appreciate your kind words.

Andrew John

Date: 9/6/2022 2:45:00 AM

Last time I saw a nonet, Shane, was - oooh - years ago. So thanks for one of these. Quite an experience.

Shane Thacker
Date: 9/8/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thank you, Andrew. This was my first Nonet. It was definitely challenging but also very fun as well.

Arlo Parker

Date: 9/5/2022 1:30:00 PM

A tour de Love...Thanks, Mr. Thacker.

Shane Thacker
Date: 9/8/2022 1:07:00 PM

You're welcome, sir.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/5/2022 9:09:00 AM

A lovely Nonet Shane, welcome to PoetrySoup… Belle

Shane Thacker
Date: 9/8/2022 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, Belle. The experience has been great thus far.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/16/2022 4:51:00 PM

Just remember, in dreams, anything is possible. Your thoughts take me to the stars. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Shane. My best to you. :) Brandy

Shane Thacker
Date: 9/1/2022 1:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, Brandy.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2022 2:57:00 AM

- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem ... hopefully there will be many more in the future - :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2022 1:16:00 PM

what a sweet first post from you. Love this poetry form.

Shane Thacker
Date: 8/2/2022 9:10:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. It was my first Nonet that I've written. I had a lot of fun writing it.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/31/2022 6:02:00 AM

A sweet and sentimental write Shane. I look forward to reading more of your work! Linda

Shane Thacker
Date: 8/2/2022 9:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda. I can't wait to post more.

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/29/2022 6:09:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you.

Shane Thacker
Date: 8/2/2022 9:06:00 PM

Thank you, Beata.