Wish

By branches of the Tanabata,
to the waters of the Trevi,
on the wall of the Virgin,
or in stars of the sky,
I will wish for thee,
in purest form,
that I find,
you here,
Love.
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Ashley Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 6:45 PM
Dear Shane, your Nonet's imagery and emotion cascades gracefully down upon the poetic page with expressive beauty. A splendid wish. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Thacker Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Susan. To find love is my greatest wish in the well of manifestation. Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a comment.
Baker Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 4:26 PM
A love, Nonet. Well written Shane. You write in many forms I see. I like to go back and see the first post of poets I read. This was a great first post. See you soon, Bill
Thacker Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 4:36 PM
Thank you, Bill. I really appreciate it. One of the reasons I love Soup, is because of the contest. Regardless if I ever win, the contest spark an idea or present a challenge when I'm feeling uninspired. It's been a great tool for me to write. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Callus Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 12:08 PM
An expressive Nonet, Shane. On meeting a new poet I always tend to go read his first one on Soup! Regards // paul
Thacker Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Thank you, Paul. I think that's a wonderful concept.
Horn Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 6:44 AM
has been history of what had been blistery part of mystery
Horn Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Andrea is great long ago up until now always knows how. Goe me would endow so I could get by some how write poems here and now
Bangalee Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 1:01 AM
beautiful nonet on love theme
Thacker Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting, on my poem, Mahtab. I appreciate your kind words.
John Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 2:45 AM
Last time I saw a nonet, Shane, was - oooh - years ago. So thanks for one of these. Quite an experience.
Thacker Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 1:12 PM
Thank you, Andrew. This was my first Nonet. It was definitely challenging but also very fun as well.
Parker Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 1:30 PM
A tour de Love...Thanks, Mr. Thacker.
Thacker Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 1:07 PM
You're welcome, sir.
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September 5, 2022 at 9:09 AM
A lovely Nonet Shane, welcome to PoetrySoup… Belle
Thacker Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, Belle. The experience has been great thus far.
Nicole Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 4:51 PM
Just remember, in dreams, anything is possible. Your thoughts take me to the stars. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Shane. My best to you. :) Brandy
Thacker Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy.
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 2:57 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem ... hopefully there will be many more in the future - :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:16 PM
what a sweet first post from you. Love this poetry form.
Thacker Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Thank you, Andrea. It was my first Nonet that I've written. I had a lot of fun writing it.
Fowler Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:02 AM
A sweet and sentimental write Shane. I look forward to reading more of your work! Linda
Thacker Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:06 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. I can't wait to post more.
Agustin Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 6:09 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you.
Thacker Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:06 PM
Thank you, Beata.
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