Wise Beyond Your Years

... you really think so?
I'm flattered to say the least,
but I honestly know not
where these words originate.
Do you think inside my squishy brain
is where they congregate?
I like to think of it like an office building
where the files always fluctuate.
Sure would suck if aliens landed,
skipping the "we come in peace" spiel
and just went straight to "ANNIHILATE!".
Knew I should have martian-proofed it
when I had the chance -
why must I always procrastinate?
But perhaps I'm taking in too many
possibilities here
(like eyes when they dilate).
Are you getting tired of this rhyme yet?
Do you wish to take time to stipulate?
Consider I did you a favor
not using big friggin' words
like amalgamate.
Never say never, right?
Hope by reading this nonsense
you're not running late.
I should know better
to realize you might well have
"A very important date".
But don't mind me I'll just by typing away
with ridiculous musings.
It is my fate!
Pity not where I am
at the present state.
I'm having oodles of fun
in this land I helped create.
My deepest apologies
if it looks to you like I hibernate.
Feel free to come by anytime,
for you see, beyond this point,
there is no gate.
But for now I really must be going!
For this is about the time...

... where my imagination starts to deflate.



NOTE: Inspired by Richard Lamoureux's comment on my poem, A Kick in the Stones.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Breidenthal Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 2:33 AM
Excellent silly write Timothy! "Consider I did you a favor,not using big friggin' words like amalgamate." Love it! Love the alien bit as well. Never forget to "martian-proof" it! ;) Always, Laura
Hicks Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Ha ha ha. So you read this one, I see. Yup ... silly is correct! But also a lot of fun to write down, so it's all good. Glad you liked it!
Buil Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:53 AM
Haha, your imagination goes on overdrive. I get the feeling! :P And you ARE wise beyond your years. Even if you still write about aliens, hehe!
Hicks Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 5:21 PM
I wanted the title to be deceptive... I'm not really sure what you could accurately call this... clever nonsense? Hahahaha.... glad you didn't flee away from this "imagination trip"...
O'Leary Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 4:03 AM
A rollercoaster through the brain! Terry
Hicks Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 5:20 PM
A rollercoaster... I like that. Just make sure you don't eat before standing in line... bad idea! Lol...
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 12:45 AM
hahaha. the meandering poet. I ENJOYED the ride with you on this one. Wise beyond your years. Hmmm, now who might have said that to you?
Hicks Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 12:59 AM
'Twas Richard that said it! You picked the perfect word to describe this... meandering. You could say it goes no where yet EVERYwhere at the same time... lol.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 7:47 AM
Funny guy! Thanks for the dedication. My second one today, read Yanny's poem if you have a chance.
Hicks Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 2:50 PM
I'll try to remember to check that out in the future. Not a dedication per say, but those four little words you said just kick-started this whole poem. For that I am most thankful :D
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