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Wisdom's Trail Vi

Among, The towering mountains Of menacing fanaticism And In the midst of the shadows Of Constant fear Agonizing humanity, Desperately, Is crawling in search of The Trail of understanding, Praying: That it would lead her Onto The valley of God-loving peace Where The people of the world, Respecting the beliefs of others, In harmony, would live, Glorifying God’s wisdom that has saved them From falling Into The ravines of voracious hate Where Man's annihilation Impatiently awaits! © Demetrios Trifiatis 10 JANUARY 2015

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Robert Lindley

Date: 2/2/2015 9:13:00 PM

My friend, look the world over and only one group is dealing destruction around the globe to any that refuse to yield to its barbarism and insane demands. No amount of appeasement will satisfy this beast. Remember in war, in conflict the aggressor sets the rules . The rules they set are murder (chopping off heads) and demand ALL humans yield to them.. I will never yield!!!!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/13/2015 9:32:00 PM

Human beings have such power; we can make a heaven of hell or a hell of heaven and too many choose to make a hell. You have spoken the truth, my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/30/2015 3:15:00 AM

You are so right my friend, M.L. K.! Thank you very much for your concern! God bless you.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/13/2015 3:31:00 AM

Hello Demetrios! Very beautiful golden pen here! I enjoyed so very much your wonderful poem my dearest friend Demetrios. A solid 7 from me! And another fav for me. Have a very nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxx D.^0^

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/13/2015 9:31:00 AM

It so nice to receive your visit dear, Dorian. It is like the sunrise! Thank you! Hugs.

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/11/2015 9:27:00 PM

As Tim says, "We need more compassion for our fellow man..." We have ALL been created equal! Why can't man act civilized instead of like animals? Great words my dearest friend!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/12/2015 5:24:00 AM

As Tim says, as you say and as I say but we need hundreds and thousands and millions to repeat what we say. We can do it if we venture out of the limited: Me, here and now! Thank you for taking the time dear, Jack, to visit and comment! I appreciate it.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/11/2015 3:57:00 PM

If only....there were some bombings in Tyre today. There is unrest in Lebanon as well, my dear poet. It is not only in France where fanaticism is felt. We live with it daily...May your words inspire us all to understand we are from one family...the family of God. Blessings, my dear sweet poet.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/12/2015 5:29:00 AM

:) Good to know you miss my visits. That in itself brings me joy

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/12/2015 5:27:00 AM

Yes, my dearest, Eileen, I know so well how close you are to danger. Lebanon has suffered a lot so I pray to be spared from the approaching danger! Thank you for visiting! I have missed your visits!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/11/2015 10:15:00 AM

Demetrios, we do need to unity together and understand of each others belief, wisdom to follow.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/12/2015 5:30:00 AM

The first step should be taken within then we march on outside and try to make a better and kinder world, dear Eve! You are so right! Thank you!

David Meade

Date: 1/10/2015 11:19:00 AM

A heartfelt prayer that I will join in praying with you dear friend. 7,fav

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2015 3:28:00 AM

Thank you so much dearest friend, David. Your visits always a joy for me.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/10/2015 10:43:00 AM

You are spot on my friend...We need more compassion for our fellow man ...Treat others like you would like to be treated.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2015 3:32:00 AM

Tim, my friend, thank you for your compassionate comment!

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/10/2015 10:07:00 AM

Demetrios, Most excellent poem here Sir!! Diversity and harmony and respect for other people are all so very important!! We must find a positive way ahead for sure!! A most timely write here "in search of wisdom's trail." (BTW, I just posted my narrative write on "JE SUIS CHARLIE -- Afterthought," if have a moment to read it.) Best Always and Have A Great Weekend!! Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2015 3:34:00 AM

Mein freund, Gary, thank you for your analytical comment and your generous grading.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 1/10/2015 9:40:00 AM

Hi Demetrios: Beautiful poem. May I coin a phrase as one who is married to a Colombian and my family consists of Italian, Indian,and Puerto Rican, "What we need is less tribes and more diversity".

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2015 3:36:00 AM

Ralf, it so good to receive your visit again! You are so right my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/10/2015 9:27:00 AM

Living in Canada we have a multitude of different cultures and religions living side by side. I do believe harmony is possible. Myself I am married to a Chinese woman our son is engaged to an East Indian girl. The best part is we have some amazing family dinners.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2015 3:45:00 AM

" Wo shi zuoguren! Wo I Ni" dear Richard. I have spent nine months in China and have a lot of friends there. Having lived in Canada for almost twenty years , I know what you are talking about. My daughter's mother is French Canadian and both live there. My brother is Married to a New Zealander lady. Yes, I completely agree with you!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/10/2015 6:28:00 AM

This is excellent. I find so much meaning in these words. As I read it these are thoughts I myself have pondered.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/10/2015 7:26:00 AM

I am not surprised that you entertain similar thoughts my friend, Maurice! The contrary would certainly surprise me! Thank you very much. God bless you!