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Dawn, you fall upon striking radiance, Birds lift the sky using wings patience, Barren and wizened tree, I trust your vitality, A sympathy that teams will ignite beauty. In a palm tree, I sense the vicinity of God, Insight into the immersion of her slid plod, Unbounded in the knot of her whirling line, Sprouts that grip her arm detect the shine. A forlorn area with five palms and no plan, A sequence can be upheld or a dream span, The Sun, also the wind, renovate them up, God is the lone neighbor of this turning shrub. They sent me a brilliant association card, Interface with each one or tool; odds aired, An echo or soft spell will assist you to connect, Permit a break to interfere with the planet. Dwelling to gain my insight and future move, If you're a skeptic, ignore others' reprove, Alike fall leaves, beliefs, and flows are altering, Take advantage of your mothers cunning. The clay of life morphs sort of borne gold, Hooray for the victorious funding reward! Poems are alike tepid baths for the heart, When the wind blow and the shrubs melt. Connect with your spirit and the sacred tree, I barely foresee the specifics of your jubilee, To simplify your life, adapt rather than resist, Ultimately, colors can evoke thoughts of drift. I sense grace in how she sways in the breeze. Dignity as she soars to the heights, appease. She relaxes as she exudes the noxious air She displays courage by resisting despair.
Written: May 15, 2022 1st Place contest winner Wisdom From Trees Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 5/28/2022 11:52:00 PM
Once again happy to be back to your great poem with Congratulations on your first place win, dear Lasaad
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Date: 5/28/2022 4:06:00 PM
Back with BIG congrats on your first place win, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/28/2022 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Wisdom Tree" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.......................
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Date: 5/28/2022 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful first place win my friend, with this stunningly beautiful poem. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/16/2022 5:19:00 PM
A deeply moving and thoughtful poem, Lasaad. Trees can teach us so much, as can many things in nature. observation is the seeds of manifestation. A great entry for the contest. May those that judge choose wisely. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/16/2022 1:45:00 AM
"To simplify your life, adapt rather than resist, Ultimately, colors can evoke thoughts of drift". There is much wisdom in these lines. A lovely poem on Nature and the palm trees... ! All the best in the contest, dear friend
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Date: 5/16/2022 12:53:00 AM
So much talent here, I loved your poem. I use to walk past nature as a child, I didn't appreciate its beauty. It's funny how things change as you get older.
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Date: 5/15/2022 1:44:00 PM
So much we can learn from nature as we survive on its blessings. Intriguing write, Lasaad. Best to you.
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Date: 5/15/2022 11:58:00 AM
Lassad, how absolutely breathtaking~how glorious the palm, how glorious life, how glorious God! Stunning! Good luck in the contest~I am sure it’s #1. :)Paulette
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Date: 5/15/2022 11:25:00 AM
Hello Lassad, I love this poem. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
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