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Wisdom and Success

Various options would be pursued.
Along paths to consciousness and progress.
There is an avid need to expand our horizons.
To achieve absolute excellence.

Appeasing one's spirit is a difficult task.
While pursuing the crowning fulfillment.
The pinnacle of excellence that we never reach.

Mankind would do well to recall its wisdom.
Taken with no belief at all, a deep sigh of relief.
Having its own independent mentality.
If the spirit can be brought to consciousness.

And learn to recognize the quirky appeal of flaws.
It would be pointless to strain to earn a Life flawless.

Attempting to find meaning in the lack of a notion.
Spirits devoid of awe would weaken.
There must always be a fire in one's veins.

Written: May 15, 2023 

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Paige Hind May 16, 2023 at 10:26 AM Hmm. This has a lot of interesting wisdom in here. Your testament to spirit is beautiful.

Yann Rolland May 16, 2023 at 7:24 AM absolutely wonderful, how to manage our spirit,, i retain mainly "Spirits devoid of awe would weaken." such appreciation and thanks about that yann

Vijay Pandit May 16, 2023 at 5:45 AM Wisdom words throughout, Lasaad. A key to success!

Valsa George May 15, 2023 at 8:31 PM "There must always be a fire in one's veins." Do agree with you absolutely ! It is that fire that makes us strive for success. Such a beautiful and inspirational poem !