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Wisdom

The bloom starts no repentance,
it is not afraid of the slip just yet.
each gentle wind is a sigh from the sky.
be scented now, then learn to die.
It is the fleeting we become.
in how we glow before we've gone.

Copyright © Rowena Velasco | Year Posted 2025

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August 10, 2025 at 9:04 PM

Profound, Rowena! The depth of this inspirational canvassing is so supreme. Wisdom is so much of my focus in my poetic canvassing. Throughout my soon-to-be 84 years, each morning when I awake, I continue to ask Gog for divine wisdom and guidance, that I may continue to be an instrument of His peace, and a reflector of His love: IN HOLY NAVIGATION The Holy Spirit, Daily sharpens awareness; Echoing wisdom: It's divine guidance always Navigating us through life:- One. Peace and Love.

August 10, 2025 at 9:09 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words. Your lifelong devotion to seeking God’s wisdom is truly inspiring. I love how your poem reflects that holy navigation — a beautiful reminder to keep walking in His peace and love.

August 7, 2025 at 4:08 PM

We must let soul’s light escape, and let loves glow saturate around us living moment by moment. You have impressed with sagacity, Rowena!

August 7, 2025 at 6:32 PM

Thank you so much! I love how you’ve expressed that—beautifully said and full of truth. Your words inspire me right back.

August 7, 2025 at 5:13 AM

Wisdom is to enjoy the beauty of today, because tomorrow we’re gone. Your words have excited my muse, there’s a song here. Thank you for sharing your mind and heart!

August 7, 2025 at 5:28 AM

That means so much—thank you! I’m so glad the words spoke to you and sparked your muse. Can’t wait to see what song comes out of it!"

August 7, 2025 at 4:56 AM

ah ~ beautiful

August 7, 2025 at 5:12 AM

Thank you very much !

August 7, 2025 at 4:24 AM

If only we could all glow in a positive way, Rowena. Some want to glow in a negative way and ruin lives as they go. Learning to die when the time comes and accepting death is not an easy process. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

August 7, 2025 at 4:48 AM

Thank you, Sara. You're so right — not everyone chooses to shine kindly, and facing our mortality takes real strength. Appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.

August 7, 2025 at 3:35 AM

Rowena! Your skillful depiction of the transient splendor and existence forces us to savor this present moment.

August 7, 2025 at 4:47 AM

Wow, thank you! Just trying to capture the little moments while they last."

August 7, 2025 at 2:59 AM

beautiful and deep poem, enjoyed the images a lot, thanks poet

August 7, 2025 at 3:09 AM

Thank you so much! Really glad you enjoyed it — I appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts.

August 7, 2025 at 2:57 AM

Sometimes we get caught up in the chaos of the day and we forget to cherish each precious moment that we have. This soft delicate piece is a simple reminder of that. Thank you for sharing this thought, Rowena. John

August 7, 2025 at 3:08 AM

Thank you so much, John. That really means a lot. It’s something I try to remind myself of too — slowing down and really being in the moment.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

August 7, 2025 at 2:07 AM

The poem encourages to live the life fully and shine brightly even though it is temporary.Like the poem.

August 7, 2025 at 2:15 AM

Thank you! Really appreciate that.

Victor Buhagiar

August 7, 2025 at 1:43 AM

This poem is quietly profound, A meditation of life and beauty. Well done.

August 7, 2025 at 1:51 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm truly grateful the poem resonated with you in that way.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 6, 2025 at 9:12 PM

The beauty and wisdom of this elegant poem captivated me, Rowena. Very best wishes. :)

August 6, 2025 at 9:14 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and wishes. Wishing you continued inspiration and joy in your own writing journey! :)

August 6, 2025 at 7:01 PM

Lovely written, Rowena. Surely it is the evanescence of the glow which renders it so bittersweet. Kudos, Gershon

August 6, 2025 at 8:09 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon. Your words mean a lot. Yes, it's that fleeting glow that teaches us to cherish the moment before it fades.

sara Etgen-Baker

August 6, 2025 at 4:52 PM

loved your words of wisdom, especially the last two lines. I appreciate your poetic voice. hugs, Sara

August 6, 2025 at 5:34 PM

Thanks so much, Sara! big hugs right back!

Joseph P. DiMino

August 6, 2025 at 1:52 PM

Indeed, life is for living. Burn brightly! Both day and night, blazing way to find. Every pore, every thought we have, an electrified flame of being. Hell a cheap, phony duplication. Each of us, born of blessed starlight. Greater the divine fuel as we move on.

August 6, 2025 at 2:20 PM

Wow, this is such a vibe—fiery, bold, and uplifting. Love that line about being “born of blessed starlight.” Totally needed this spark today! Thanks Joe.

August 6, 2025 at 2:38 AM

Such a touching piece Rowena, i especially love 'each gentle wind is a sigh from the sky' hugs jan xx

August 6, 2025 at 2:57 AM

Thank you, Jan! That line came from a quiet moment with nature— Sending hugs right back.

August 6, 2025 at 2:33 AM

Dear Rowena, I love the way you've captured the fleeting nature of life and beauty, reminding us to appreciate the present moment. The phrase 'be scented now, then learn to die' is especially striking, and the final line 'in how we glow before we've gone' is a gorgeous reflection on the preciousness of life. Best, Anne

August 6, 2025 at 2:56 AM

Anne, thank you so much for this beautiful comment. Here's to catching the glow while we can

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 6, 2025 at 2:25 AM

- Sometimes the hand of death is extra rough... we must enjoy beauty while it lives... a lovely poem, Rowena :) - hugs

August 6, 2025 at 2:54 AM

Thank you so much :) Yes, that’s so true—life is fragile, and beauty even more so. Sending hugs back your way!

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