Faleshia Murphy Poet Limerick

Wipe Out

I wish I could erase  some of my past
Make a bigger and brighter future fast
Erase the pain and become whole
Erase the rain and the snow
Erase those days I felt like an ass


FOR ERASER CONTEST

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 7, 2010 at 6:17 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Faleshia. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2010 at 12:12 PM haha, Love that last line. I'd like to erase those days too. Congratulations, Faleshia. Luv, andrea

Larry Belt June 5, 2010 at 10:58 AM Congrats on your win too Faleshia.....Awesome Limerick......Larry

Dr.Ram Mehta June 4, 2010 at 5:12 PM Congrats on the win

Joyce Johnson June 4, 2010 at 4:47 PM Colngratulations. Great entry. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 4, 2010 at 3:18 PM Congrats Faleshia on your HM in the Eraser contst with this neart write so fine.. glad to see your name up in lights... enjoy a special honor.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

June 4, 2010 at 12:55 PM Got a chuckle out of the ending. I'm sure there's times when all of us have felt this way. Best wishes in the contest with this one. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen

Poet Destroyer A June 4, 2010 at 12:41 PM cute, enjoyed, thanks for the smile,..Sidney LeeAnn

Carolyn Devonshire June 4, 2010 at 12:18 PM LOL Cute limerick, Faleshia. There are times we'd all like to erase from our past. The last line was very funny! Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn