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Wipe Out

I wish I could erase some of my past Make a bigger and brighter future fast Erase the pain and become whole Erase the rain and the snow Erase those days I felt like an ass FOR ERASER CONTEST

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2010 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Faleshia. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 12:12:00 PM

haha, Love that last line. I'd like to erase those days too. Congratulations, Faleshia. Luv, andrea

Larry Belt

Date: 6/5/2010 10:58:00 AM

Congrats on your win too Faleshia.....Awesome Limerick......Larry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2010 5:12:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/4/2010 4:47:00 PM

Colngratulations. Great entry. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2010 3:18:00 PM

Congrats Faleshia on your HM in the Eraser contst with this neart write so fine.. glad to see your name up in lights... enjoy a special honor.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

Date: 6/4/2010 12:55:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of the ending. I'm sure there's times when all of us have felt this way. Best wishes in the contest with this one. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2010 12:41:00 PM

cute, enjoyed, thanks for the smile,..Sidney LeeAnn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2010 12:18:00 PM

LOL Cute limerick, Faleshia. There are times we'd all like to erase from our past. The last line was very funny! Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn