Wipe It. Meet Me.

When I shut the door
reduce your blatant name
to silence, I don’t caress
but sob your skin.
A pen carves paper.
as I shrink and crookedly
sip the lack in a
missmiss, miss you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smalling Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Yes, you are good. You belong at the center of the poetic world ... your every write is a delight in moving a them with precision to a focus of precise imagination.
Gumbo Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 6:59 AM
Awww... I liked this little write! Well done Jan. Hugs you! :) Izzy
Chircop Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 11:29 PM
A PEN CARVES PAPER,MISSMISS,MISS YOU-very sweet,sweet indeed---charma
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