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winter's waltz

snow stains an iced haze, as poinsettia's dreams waltz ~ ruby elegance

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2023 5:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement on the winner's list in Tania's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 11:36:00 AM

Congrats with this gorgeous ku

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/24/2023 12:27:00 PM

Hiya, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful haiku!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/26/2023 8:18:00 PM

Awh, thank you so much for honouring my haiku with a first place win, I'm deeply grateful for your kindness, beautiful soul :) This contest was very intriguing! Sending love & light your way ~

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/20/2023 4:42:00 AM

Wow. This is beautiful! Very nice :)

Judy Ball

Date: 12/19/2023 8:07:00 PM

I do so like the Poinsettias. Did you know when the blooming season is over it is just a green plant. The top leaves turn red in blooming season but they do need light. I bought one for my dining table, brought it home , put it on the table and my cat took one look at it and peed on it. (sigh) A fine write my friend. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB

Bill Baker

Date: 12/16/2023 9:27:00 PM

Lovely imagery of the poinsettia and the season, Hiya. I like your Haiku, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 12/16/2023 12:33:00 PM

Gorgeous writing. It was fautless. :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/16/2023 12:05:00 PM

I just told Craig that I have not written one recently yours is beautiful will be back to read more of your poems hugs Shadow

Paul Callus

Date: 12/16/2023 8:58:00 AM

Yours is a short poem that contains both lovely imagery and personification, Hiya. Poinsettias are very beautiful, especially at this time of year; we have a big one, but alas no snow to compliment it!! ~ Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2023 1:38:00 PM

This is sure a gem!

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/14/2023 9:31:00 AM

Oh, what a delightfully ethereal sight, dear Hiya. Poinsettias exude such exquisite beauty, akin to precious rubies. However, one mustn't forget their treacherous nature, for they possess a venomous quality! Best of luck with the contest

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/14/2023 9:15:00 AM

Such a beautiful winter Haiku Hiya... Thank you for your visits to my page dear sweet poetess... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 12/14/2023 4:31:00 AM

Short & exquisite! White & Red together are so powerful ! ??

Deb M

Date: 12/14/2023 4:05:00 AM

Hiya what a beautiful delicate poem!Love it… I can see why you and Ink are best buddies….you both are so lovely and Kind! I appreciate your wonderful words and thoughts always! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/13/2023 4:27:00 PM

an absolutely exquisite winter Haiku with the perfect title. Well done, Hiya. Best wishes for the contest, hugs, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 12/13/2023 3:38:00 PM

Beautiful read!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/13/2023 1:53:00 PM

i like you writing in these more condensed forms, and this is such a pretty haiku, i love it, and i like poinsettias - they are indeed 'ruby elegance'

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/13/2023 12:07:00 PM

What a dreamy image, Hiya. Poinsettia's are so beautiful, ruby elegance indeed. They are also poisoness! ~Blessings to you and yours ~Anaya

Jay Narain

Date: 12/13/2023 10:36:00 AM

Nice poem.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/13/2023 10:08:00 AM

Perfect for the Christmas season Hiya. Tom

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/13/2023 9:10:00 AM

Just watered mine before reading your little gem. I will de-pot mine after the holidays, and see what happens.

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/13/2023 7:22:00 AM

Where she lacks in fragrance, she replaces in awesome elegance in the harsh settings, as noted, Hiya. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/13/2023 7:12:00 AM

A see the dreams waltzing as I read your poem, Hiya. Ruby elegance--awesome ending!

Tom Woody

Date: 12/13/2023 6:12:00 AM

Love it Hiya. My wife loves poinsettias

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2023 5:43:00 AM

I learnt the name of this winter flower through your gorgeous haiku angelic star. I absolutely love everything about this haiku. Especially the opening line and ruby elegance. How you’ve set a wintry theme, where amidst the iced haze ponsiettas dreams waltz and come alive unfurling the deepest dreams in such ruby tinted elegance is beyond impressive and impeccable to read. Just stunning! Pleasure reading this gorgeous haiku. speaks and paints vivid imagery in few syllables, best wishes.nailed it