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Winters Virginal Carpet

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Date: 12/17/2010 6:40:00 AM
Nice James.. you have varied talents I see..very nice to look at as well as read. Congrats to you. BG
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Date: 12/16/2010 1:52:00 PM
Good one..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/15/2010 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations, James on 2nd place in my contest, I loved the snow falling, very creative and wonderful~~
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Date: 12/15/2010 9:29:00 AM
congradulations in Constances contest. john
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:34:00 AM
beautiful, congrats on your win in the contest James
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:21:00 AM
Great work here, James. Beautifully simple and symbolic write. Congrats on your win. Dan C
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:04:00 AM
Perfect name for this "Amazing" Line, Highlander! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Have a great day tomorrow! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2010 6:43:00 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:47:00 PM
Wow. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/14/2010 9:38:00 PM
The most picturesque for sure, Congratulations, James!!
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:30:00 PM
Congrats James on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:32:00 PM
Congrats. James on a fine job worthy of a top honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:53:00 PM
What a beautiful expression of snow! Congratulations, dear James! I tried to make the word FLY really fly in my monoku but either the "L" or the "Y' would fly in the wrong direction. After 1 hour I just gave it up... :(
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Date: 12/14/2010 12:57:00 PM
This is great. Very visual and very well written. Congratulations on your win in the monoku contest.
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2010 11:34:00 AM
Hey James, I love the extra touch with the layout.. Hope Constance like it too.. Good luck with this one, made me smile :) xx
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:50:00 PM
Interesting and artistic presentation. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful Christmas. Karen
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:23:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today James. Hope to be reading it for a long time to come. Thank you for sharing it. The best to you in the contest and always. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:36:00 PM
Very interesting one with that picture to accompany it. Cool little snowflakes.
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:59:00 PM
Winter's first snowfall is truly a delight, James! Beautiful layout in this image-filled monoku. Best wishes in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:28:00 PM
lovely line, good luck in the contest James
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:15:00 PM
I feel as if I am in a snowstorm! :) Nicely done...and beautiful!
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:47:00 PM
Hello James, You are so witty and this turned out so beautiful! Looks like a winner to me..... As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:14:00 PM
Nice layout with a nice expression on Winter's virginal carpet, James
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:01:00 PM
Nice one James.... a beautiful picture painted in this gem....all the best in the contest...
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