Winters Virginal Carpet

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Winters first snowfall ** in crystalline ice lay ** virginal carpet






~*~ James Fraser ~*~

~*~ for Constance's ~*~ "One Amazing Line" contest ~*~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gorelick Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 6:40 AM
Nice James.. you have varied talents I see..very nice to look at as well as read. Congrats to you. BG
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Good one..Congratulations on your win..Sara
La France Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations, James on 2nd place in my contest, I loved the snow falling, very creative and wonderful~~
Loving Iii Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 9:29 AM
congradulations in Constances contest. john
Roberts Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:34 AM
beautiful, congrats on your win in the contest James
Cwiak Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Great work here, James. Beautifully simple and symbolic write. Congrats on your win. Dan C
Haick Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:04 AM
Perfect name for this "Amazing" Line, Highlander! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Have a great day tomorrow! Love, Audrey
Duffin Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 6:43 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon
Mannan Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 10:47 PM
Wow. Many congratulations for this win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 9:38 PM
The most picturesque for sure, Congratulations, James!!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 7:30 PM
Congrats James on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
Freeman Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:32 PM
Congrats. James on a fine job worthy of a top honor. Agape, Moses
Scripca Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 3:53 PM
What a beautiful expression of snow! Congratulations, dear James! I tried to make the word FLY really fly in my monoku but either the "L" or the "Y' would fly in the wrong direction. After 1 hour I just gave it up... :(
Radke Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:57 PM
This is great. Very visual and very well written. Congratulations on your win in the monoku contest.
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Hey James, I love the extra touch with the layout.. Hope Constance like it too.. Good luck with this one, made me smile :) xx
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December 7, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Interesting and artistic presentation. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful Christmas. Karen
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 12:23 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today James. Hope to be reading it for a long time to come. Thank you for sharing it. The best to you in the contest and always. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Very interesting one with that picture to accompany it. Cool little snowflakes.
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 4:59 PM
Winter's first snowfall is truly a delight, James! Beautiful layout in this image-filled monoku. Best wishes in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 4:28 PM
lovely line, good luck in the contest James
Richards Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 4:15 PM
I feel as if I am in a snowstorm! :) Nicely done...and beautiful!
Ruebel Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 1:47 PM
Hello James, You are so witty and this turned out so beautiful! Looks like a winner to me..... As Always, Shar
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Nice layout with a nice expression on Winter's virginal carpet, James
Falotico Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 1:01 PM
Nice one James.... a beautiful picture painted in this gem....all the best in the contest...
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