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Winters Slumber

Sweet lady of my dreams
  Enjoy my winterlude
    Time has come
      For us to slow the pace
        Enjoy our embracing
          Snowing outside
            The cold is fierce
              Fire’s warm
               Hold my hand
                Soft notes play
                Its Braham's my sweet
                Keep you safe 
             From the storm
          Sweet sonata in blue
      Winters slumber
     Snows piled high
      Animals hibernate
       All is calm
        My heart is true
          Everlasting love
            Always we have each other
             Settle back close your eyes
               Blizzard conditions 
                Safe inside
                  Your face so delicate 
                    In the fire light
                     winter rages
                      I’ll keep you warm
                    With my lullaby.
                  Winterlude.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jones Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 7:56 AM
Charming poetry with a matching form! Congratulations on your placement!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Lovely writing. Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina
Fowler Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 7:21 AM
A lovely shape for your sweet sonata my dear friend. You are so very creative and original Svvie! hugs! :)
Volumes Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 7:57 AM
I always say " if you cant be better- be different" ( Sometimes it works- and sometimes people think I am just plain weird). - But I am having fun !! Love your comment as always dear friend. Every best wish from Wen.
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November 25, 2023 at 11:20 AM
What a beautiful piece of poetry! It has a profound depth and poignant insight, displaying an unrivaled level of intelligence. My friend SV, you have wonderfully constructed an emotional tapestry that captures the reader's heart. Your poem is filled with tender thoughts and unwavering affection. The stunning imagery, along with the flawless word choice, gives another dimension of utter beauty to this wonderful work. Your writing is truly outstanding.
Volumes Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 1:19 PM
It seems to be the way SP, if I work on a poem, its of little interest to others, but the poems that seem to write themselves, which happens quite often, are the ones which others see some merit. This was one such piece. it came straight from me to the site with little or no effort. Thank you so much for letting me know that you liked it.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 8:00 AM
WOW. Love this. Awesome poetry. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Volumes Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Thank you Gina, I always think of winter as a peaceful time. Things seem to slow down, and a cosy feeling comes over a home, unlike in any other season. Its always a nice place and a safe haven to come home to. Every best wish to you Gina. Your kind words are appreciated.
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