Winter's Rise

as wind slowly, silently, stirs dry grass
forest ruminants eye darkening skies
sniffing for the scents of Winter’s warning
watch the fading “V’s” - distant disguise.

once dappled fawns stand tall now tawny
alert to changes in the forest’s tone
urgency replaces Summer’s idyll
leafs red alert of warning wildly blown.

cricket violins fall coldly silent
the dragon and the butterflies called home
turtles abandon logs for mud bank nest
gnarled trees embrace the fate of stoic gnome.

burrowers and builders peer from retreats 
as thinly spreads this crust of Winter’s bite
chasing the sap of life within its core
hoarfrost to tinge the soul in black and white.

chilled stealth of ice reclaims the rippled pond
swans beauty  - fades to black - dots in the sky
hawks ride the frigid winds of Winter’s rise
I store my kayak paddle with a sigh.


John G. Lawless
©10/8/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rose  Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 3:57 PM
I find great beauty in your words today John, Thank you for sharing your poem and talent. This is comment Sunday, could you please leave a few extra comments on site today to help raise the community spirit, it would be most appreciated
Michael Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:53 AM
There'll be another Summer...All the best John
Sands Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Great one John. I can really feel it at the ending too :)
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