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Winter's Pewter Ghost

Like an eye through a keyhole
the moon's eclipse obfuscates
sun's white incandescence,
turns the solstice to morgue-gray.

As mist rises from a charcoal lake
laced with ice's torn edges
minions of leafless oak and alder
witness in slate silence
winter's pewter ghost,
floating phoenix-like
above July's embers
when water shimmered with indigo, 
rippling tangelo butterflies in its wake. 

Now sirens of graphite shores
lure like dark sentinels into platinum light 
to unleash the fortunes 
of this nether wasteland.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ravidas Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 3:05 AM
Considering an act of nature as a work of art - this is a sure sign of the poet. Perfectly done, Dale. And congrats.
Cozart Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Thank you, Kurt.
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. Astounding! The way you use words in imagery is a true poetic talent. Well done!
Cozart Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Aw, thanks so much, Susan.
Barden Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:17 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest, Dale - blessings for many more, my friend! :-)
Cozart Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Thanks, Greg!
Kiser Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 11:12 AM
Love this line: "rippling tangelo butterflies in its wake. " Thanks for a great read.
Cozart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 11:28 AM
You're most welcome, ML.
Krampe Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Love it! "winter's pewter ghost" evokes such a haunting image.
Cozart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:57 AM
Thanks very much, Agnes.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 6:30 PM
Wow Dale! Your poetry blows me away. This is a stunning piece that gave me chills from its beauty. : )
Cozart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Thanks you very much, Connie.
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