Winter's Lantern

The snow on the ground is aglow at midnight

A sheet of moonlight

Like a sketchpad with shadows
Stretched from tree limbs furiously penciled in,
A speakeasy dance floor from the 1920s
Mobbed and sashaying,
Doing the jitterbug,

With black arms and black legs
Pumping stutter-stepping,
Swaying forward then back
Hands risen as if polishing the air with praise

In a wind that creaks in these trees
Like kindling wood caught on fire.

Who is the ghost, here, in this freezing rhythm?

These poltergeist dancers?
Floating
Between now and then drinking gin,
Lit by a swinging winter lantern?

Or is it me? Weaving through the phantom crowd,
A traveler from the future,
Pardon me, looking good,
Carrying a tray of translucent light above my head?

Or is the celestial artist the true spirit?
The only one who really exists?

Yes, I think it is the brilliant artist,
The invisibly sketching Goddess bringing life to the long dead,
While lurking from her corner table, cold cigarette in hand,
Diligently recording history.

Oh oblivion of time and space I make my way to her,
A coming total lunar eclipse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/7/2019 9:07:00 AM
Hi Robert, I enjoyed this bit of time travelling muse. The poem was full of tactile images and visual delights. Well done
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 8/7/2019 7:21:00 PM
You are most kind and thank you!
Date: 2/13/2019 2:47:00 PM
I like how you used the "sheet of moonlight" to journey through time..,Great write!..
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Date: 2/14/2019 9:48:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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