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Winter's Friday Afternoon

Winter's Friday afternoon The Sabbath comes in so soon The sun, if there be one fairly plummets down Already's appeared the moon ~ humming a Sabbath tune ~ Sabbath Peace, Soupers ~

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Date: 1/19/2020 4:31:00 PM
Happy indeed! A lovely tribute to Sabbath no matter what day it lands.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/19/2020 7:05:00 PM
And thank you for a lovely comment, Caren. Peace and joy, Gershon
Date: 1/18/2020 10:44:00 PM
Time flies! Very nice couplet, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/19/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Evelyn. Tempus fugit (when you're having fun, anyway!). Cheers, Gershon
Date: 1/18/2020 11:39:00 AM
Peace to you, my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/18/2020 8:24:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Blessings and Hope, Gershon
Date: 1/18/2020 9:04:00 AM
A lovely piece.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/18/2020 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. Peace be unto you and yours! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Date: 1/18/2020 8:52:00 AM
A day late, but hope it was an extra special Sabbath - a really great write my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/18/2020 8:22:00 PM
Yes, an extra-special Sabbath, it was, Jennifer. Hope you had a blessed day too! Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 1/17/2020 6:37:00 PM
Happy Sabbath friend... enjoy... lovely poem btw... :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/18/2020 8:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend. Hope you've had a peaceful Friday night and Saturday too! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 1/17/2020 5:33:00 PM
Happy sabbath GW, I used to love all the rituals with the food and candles on a Friday night:-) hugs jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/18/2020 8:07:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. It's really heartening that you have such sweet memories of the Jewish homes you worked in. Thanks for inspiring me. Cheers, Gershon

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