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Sweet songbirds sing no cheerful refrains; complete silence greets Winter's approach. Bittersweet; Autumn colors forecast sleet as Winter storms start to encroach. Barbecue grills safely stowed away; blue skies get dappled with clouds of grey. Mildew spreading among rotting leaves; Deja vu feelings come into play. Snow smothers the icy streets until slow-moving snowplows arrive on site. Row on row of cars are left stranded, though the city looks good, draped in white. Everything gets snowbound, yet people cling to the hope Winter won't stay long. Spring will arrive soon, and Her warmth will bring the songbirds back to sing their song.

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Date: 2/10/2020 1:49:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/10/2020 3:38:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2020 5:55:00 PM
Great poem for this time of year with lovely imagery. Congrats, emile
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Date: 2/8/2020 6:02:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2020 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful picture to go with your poem. I wish I was walking down the path. Yes, Spring will soon arrive. Enjoy your weekend......
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Date: 2/8/2020 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/6/2020 5:36:00 PM
A beautifully descriptive winter lento, many congratulations on your win emile:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2020 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/25/2020 3:26:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Emile - I have not written this form but I will have to try ... I enjoyed this very much. Excellent work, my friend! :o)
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Date: 1/25/2020 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, coming from you this is a compliment indeed my friend, Emile.

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