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Lento

A Lento consists of quatrains with a fixed rhyme scheme of abcb, defe, and so on, the second and fourth lines of each verse rhyme.  All the FIRST words of each verse rhyme.

Sweet songbirds sing no cheerful refrains; complete silence greets Winter's approach. Bittersweet Autumn colors, forecast sleet as Winter snows start to encroach. Barbecue grills safely stowed away; blue skies are dappled with clouds of grey. Mildew spreading among the dead leaves; Deja vu feelings come into play. Snow smothers the snowed-in streets until slow-moving snowplows arrive on site. Row upon row of cars left stranded, though the city looks good, draped in white. Everything is snowbound or frozen; thing is, Winter will not stay too long. Spring will arrive soon, and Her warmth will bring the songbirds back to sing their song.

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Date: 2/10/2020 1:49:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2020 3:38:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2020 5:55:00 PM
Great poem for this time of year with lovely imagery. Congrats, emile
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Date: 2/8/2020 6:02:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2020 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful picture to go with your poem. I wish I was walking down the path. Yes, Spring will soon arrive. Enjoy your weekend......
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Date: 2/8/2020 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/6/2020 5:36:00 PM
A beautifully descriptive winter lento, many congratulations on your win emile:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/7/2020 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/25/2020 3:26:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Emile - I have not written this form but I will have to try ... I enjoyed this very much. Excellent work, my friend! :o)
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Date: 1/25/2020 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, coming from you this is a compliment indeed my friend, Emile.

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