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Winternight Lane


chilliness glistens
under traffic citylamps
an abandoned road
time slowly travels little
mist chasing away the ghosts

angstimagerylightlonelinessmysterytanka

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Nette Onclaud

December 14, 2025 at 5:07 PM

ohhh you went deep without imposing your own musings...a shining gem, paige!

Constance La France

December 14, 2025 at 3:48 AM

Paige, lovely ~

Yann Rolland

December 11, 2025 at 3:50 PM

powerful emotion reading your tanka, waw, thanks poet

sara Etgen-Baker

December 10, 2025 at 5:49 PM

imaginative and well written Tanka. Faving

Sotto Poet

December 10, 2025 at 1:50 AM

Lovely crafted tanka, with a creative hint and ghostly feel. Paige

Victor Buhagiar

December 9, 2025 at 10:41 PM

Loved your imagination. A lively poem.

Kim Rodrigues

December 9, 2025 at 8:39 PM

Enjoyed! The pondering at pause. Like the mist chasing away the ghosts…haunting or metaphorical.

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2025 at 11:58 AM

A lovely tanka, Paige

Sam Kauffman

December 9, 2025 at 11:49 AM

Paige, you have painted a haunting picture of a dimly lit snow filled road inviting us to follow its mysteries! Love the opening line. Well done! One of your best. December blessings.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

December 9, 2025 at 8:38 AM

Dear Paige, This is wonderfully atmospheric and a little lonely, in the best way. It feels like you found a pocket of stillness in the middle of all the noise, where things slow down just enough for a bit of reflection. Keep that keen eye! Autumn Blessings, Dear Paige, Daniel

Ghairo Daniels

December 9, 2025 at 12:40 AM

Courageous how you travel abandoned roads in winter, Hun. Shiver-shake with outstanding imagery, hard working Poetess ! May all ghosts rest in Peace, Xxx.